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Title: Chapter 8 12 Jan 2009 4:41 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    im very very confused about the whole Draco thing, it seems to be moving a little too fast with very few explanations, i would suggest trying to tie the ends up before starting with a new part to the story : )
Title: Chapter 8 06 Jan 2009 5:27 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AUGH YOU'RE BRILLIANT.

    see, I'm reviewing.

    I just found this fic, and I have no idea how long ago you updated..but...but...DO IT AGAIN SOON.

    although there's a bunch of minor spelling mistakes and whatnot.
Title: Chapter 8 04 Jan 2009 1:24 pm
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story! hope to read more soon! although... what happened at the end?!?!?

    Author's Response:

    WOOT!!! YOU ARE THE ONE HUNDREDTH REVIEWER!!!! You get three chocolate frogs, an box of Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans, a hug from Severus, double hug from Harry and Draco, and a lifetime supply of butterbeer.

     

    Thanks so much for the review!!!!!!

     

    And as for the end, Draco had a meltdown, is all.......

Title: Chapter 8 04 Jan 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, Draco sort of lost the plot toward the end of this chapter when he started to rant about vampire butterflies (WTF), but the end result was pretty hilarious anyway :) I like Draco's mad plan to hold his godfather at wandpoint, and Severus's reaction (calling him Dragon, that is so Sev!) Poor Sev,both Draco and Harry really need him right now and I can tell the beginning of next chapter is going to be sooo confusing. I usually hate it when authors add Draco to a good Sev and Harry storry, but so far this is going great and I'm looking forward to seeing them get it all sorted out. HOpe that Harry stays Sev's prime focus though, Harry really needs someone just for him!

    Last few chapters have been great; this is one of my favorite Sev/Harry stories. I really like your Snape and Harry. Your Snape is a nice balance of snark & caring and you really make the seemingly contradictory character traits work together with that inner voice of his. Harry is perfect, acting like an abused child (unlike JKR's weirdly unaffected Harry) but not completely spineless and weepy, as he's so often portrayed, eg in Rakina's fics. I like that it was his idea to come forward to Snape and he is taking initiative with other things like Winky and otherwise acting appropriately feisty and independent, even as he seeks Snape's approval and love.

    Author's Response:

    I WEEP!!!! *sniff* OMG I just have to tell you, that was the SWEETEST review I have ever received. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! It means so much to me that you think my interpretation of the charcters are so good. *bawls* I COULD HUG YOU!!!! I so hope I can keep you interested and approving. And, lol, the next chapter will probably be a mess, yea!

     

    Thanks again!!!!

Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 9:58 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok. That was weird. But I love it! :D And, yes, I think Harry is acting the right age! At first he seemed slightly younger in you descriptions of him, but he acts like a 15 yr old. Peter Pan was so cool...

    Author's Response: ....:D yes it was. I'm so glad you liked it. I thought it was so silly. I'll try to keep Harry at the right age...
Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Draco and Harry together?

    Fireworks! Nice beginning! I'm looking forward to see where you go with the story. Happy New Years!

    Author's Response: lol. Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was certainly interesting! I'm curious about Ron's reaction as well, and hope that Harry and Hermione can patch things up.

    Sweet of Harry to give Winky a new family to care of, since she wanted one so badly.

    And I had to laugh at the images of Draco. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Ron's gonna be a bit ..... odd...about it, but don't get your hopes up for Harry and Hermione so soon, it'll be a while.  And I have no idea how Winky ended up in here, but I;m glad she worked.
Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! As bad as I felt for Harry at the begining of this chapter, I'm laughing like a fool at the end! Voldemort singing "Do you believe in magic"? That image alone should win you some sort of major prize for insanity!

    So, how much of Draco's insaninty is part of the plan and how much is residual stress from the encounter with Dumbledor and his pensive? Vampire Butterflys and Fairies mating for vampire children? I'm hoping it was stress reaction or Sev just overdosed his own godson.

    MORE PLEASE! I really want to see the insanity of Sev trying to take care of these two boys (plus a semi-drunk house elf!)

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Lol. Thank you so much. I'm so lad you liked it. I'm smilin form ear to ear, can you tell?

    Yes, yes, the insanity will ensue, I promise. But it won't all be laughs and crazies, we've got to hhave Minerva, don't we? And all of Draco insanity was from stress. The whole lot. When he gets up tomorrow morning he won't even remember saying any of those things. Lol. Funnies ;) Sevy didn't overdose Draco, cuz he's someow got a tolerance for calmin draught. It'll take another half hour for Draco to be lucid enough to speak, and then another hour for him to become drowsy. How'd he do it, we won't know till later......

    Draco and Harry ..... You're going to love what I do with them. I'm not supposed to tell you, but they get a brother before Christmas!!! I do so hope to keep you all interested. Thanks again!!!

Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 5:04 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay you had me on the edge of my seat right to the blasted end. I was so wrapped up into the chapter that the end of the chapter just slammed me in the face and all I wanted to do was reach forward and shake the computer shouting more, more......Please update soon. It will be a long hard wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Lol. I'm sorry, but then again I'm not. I'm so glad you liked this chapter so much. I was worried everyone would think I've gone crazy..... I'll try to update aain soon. I'll be starting collee on Monday, so updates me be a bit more irregular... Thank you!
Title: Chapter 8 02 Jan 2009 10:48 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanky you!! Hope you keep reading!!

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