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Title: Chapter 9 20 Jun 2011 5:22 pm
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't think I've told you enough times how much I love your Severus! hahaha! He's so funny! (Don't tell him I said that though!)
Title: Chapter 9 27 Feb 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: crecre (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hahahaha! Severus Snape is the best, I swear I can't get enough of him.
Title: Chapter 9 18 Apr 2009 12:49 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha - waiting to hear what Sirius and Lupin make of this Snape!
Title: Chapter 9 27 Mar 2009 3:24 pm
Reviewer: serenblack17 (Signed) [Report This]
    You have to finish this. I absolutely adore it! I'll even beta it for you. Please just continue writing this. Your Snape is completely believable even given the circumstances. It's a little rough but I read that you were having beta problems so that explains that.

    Author's Response:

    Tank you so much for your review, and your offer!!! I'mm so glad you think Snape is beleiveable! People keep asking if he's schizo....... I'd love to have a beta, but I write sporadically, and so it is usually a bit of a wait between updates. I have the next chapter about halfway done now though, and so I can send what I ave to you (because hwo knows when I'll get around to finishing it) or I could wait till I'm done. Whicever you prefer. Let me know whenever you decide!

     

Title: Chapter 9 17 Mar 2009 8:01 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story!!! Please please update!! I especially love how Severus acknowledges that his voices aren't real, yet still addresses them like separate people. ROFL!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Thanks so much!!! Nearly everyone keeps asking if Sev's a schizo, and he's not, he just talks to imaginary voices in his head........is that so odd???

    I'll try to update soon, or as soon as I can. Thanks again!!

Title: Chapter 9 11 Mar 2009 4:05 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was really sweet with Sev holding Harry and trying to comfort him. But now that it seems that harry's been assaulted or molested by his cousin, Severus needs to get the boys professional help. They need a good dose of therapy with a Mind Healer and Severus probably knows a good one.

    Or you could borrow my Healer Sue from my Snow Girl story, we could say she slipped through a hole into a parallel universe, like they did on Star Trek.

    But Severus shouldn't be made to deal with the two of them himself, it's too much for the poor man to handle, plus teach and spy . . .he'll have a breakdown. Then they'll all end up in St. Mungos, right next to the Longbottoms.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmmm.............I was battling with the idea of Harry just being a bit clingy rater than in emotional tatters for this bit, you know, after I considered not putting this bit in at all, but now I'm ot too sure. I probably should start some kind of counseling, but I really REALLY wanted to keep it between Harry and Sev. I was tinking, if he HAD to be treated, ten Sev could use his Occlumency/Legilimency training as a sort of therpy. PROPER training, mind you.

     And Sev won't be spying anymore. When I explain Draco's information later you'll see why. and lol. Suc dire predictions you have!! I promise, none of our boys will end up in Mungo's, at least not for anything mental healt related. :D

    Thank you so much for the review!!

Title: Chapter 9 11 Mar 2009 3:16 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it, I really do! But be careful not to put too much into it! Harry's horrors are quite enough and you've already added Draco's trauma as well and Hermione's weired assumptions and so on and so forth. I think you should try to solve some of the situations a bit before adding more to the mix. Else it might get a bit confusing. Now we'll have to deal with Sirius and Remus, the papers, Albus later on I guess, the Weasley's reaction as well - quite a few battlefields... I hope you won't get too tangled in all that, it would be really sad because I love the story so far!

    Author's Response: *sighI yes....yes....I will make sure to clear up at least a few of them, mainly Hermione's issues and the herd of Weasleys, in the very near future. Siri and Remy are in the next chapter, as well as the Prophet, and maybe....a Slytherin conversation, but not between who you think. But that last one won''t probably come up till chapter eleven. Also, I'm really trying to get the school year started. Can you imagine? Nearly ten chapters and not a single class. WOW!
Title: Chapter 9 10 Mar 2009 7:52 pm
Reviewer: Ara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, this is developing very nicely. It's always pleasing to see Harry, even an older Harry, acting like a proper child, such as he wasn't when he was a small child. I like your Severus as well, he certainly does manage well with Harry, and I wouldn't be surprised to see him doing a lot of pretending to be big bad Potions Master to keep everyone else on their toes! And next Serius and Remus' response to Severus' guardianship? Bruised egos and sensibilities ahead! This will be fun!

    And now I'll go back a chapter or two because I don't remember Draco meeting Severus and Harry...

    Thank you for writing and good luck in your exams :)
Title: Chapter 9 10 Mar 2009 12:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Dudley tou..touched him? Oooh, (shudder, shudder)!

    I like how you've had Snape and Harry's relationship evolve. Poor Draco, poor Harry, poor Snape that he has to deal with the two of them and their horrific pasts! Well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, they're all poor, poor dudes....*sigh*
Title: Chapter 9 10 Mar 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: Leigh Stone (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. I am confused about one thing. Is Severus a schizophrenic or is there another explanation for his voices?

    Author's Response: Lol! Tank you for the review. ANd no, Sev isnt a Schizo, he's just plain crazy, is all.

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