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Title: Chapter 11 29 Apr 2009 6:26 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Just because there's not a lot of ACTION doesn't make it boring. Lots of interesting reflection going on, although I do wonder if Sirius isn't a bit OOC being so nice to Sev, even after the memories from Harry...then again, that could be from me reading way too many Sirius-bashing fics...
Title: Chapter 11 29 Apr 2009 1:23 pm
Reviewer: Caliko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my... I just got shivers down my back... lol Good chapter, and i look forward to the next!
Title: Chapter 11 29 Apr 2009 8:40 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    No problem about Sev and Lily but I do hope you'll explain a bit more later ;-)

    Thanks
Title: Chapter 11 29 Apr 2009 7:01 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it!!! No problem with the political stuff - I think it's neat. I really like the Marauders baiting Snape, and the bits about Snape's past. I really want to know about Snape's other kid!!! One thing though - blue eyes?? Lily's eyes were green, and Sev's black (which is actually genetically really dark brown) - where does the blue come from? And is this other kid actually Harry? I kinda hope not. Keep up the wonderful work! I'm thoroughly enjoying this!

    Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I totally thought this chapter was going to bomb.Yes, i did think Remus and Sirius needed to bug Snape for a bit. The blue remus need to bug Snape for a bit. The blue eyes though, hereditary. Since I havent a clue what color Snape's parents' eyes were, I'm going with black (really dark brown) for Tobias, and Deep blue for Eileen. And if it is posted somewhere that their eye colors are different.....oh well!! ANd no, the other kid isnt Harry. Thank you again for the review!!!
Title: Chapter 11 29 Apr 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that the chapter posted twice. This has a very interesting twist, and I'm really looking orward to where you're going with the story.

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