Oh this was a great chapter! I really liked HArry's offer to remove Severus' dark mark and his observation that Dumbledore does just say "It can't be done" without even trying anything.
Salazar's Light is fabulous, I can see it in my head. And Severus' reason for dousing the fire, torches and candles is something I honestly would never have thought of for myself, though once you pointed it out, it made perfect sense.
But the absolute best part is how gob-smacked Severusis at being referred to as "Father" by his little snakes.
I loved it!
| Title: Chapter 19
| 25 Feb 2010 10:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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great chapter thank you so much I loved the check list at the beginning thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 19
| 24 Feb 2010 6:06 am
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| Reviewer: blackblood (Anonymous)
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So glad you are updating! I enjoyed Snape's speech to the Slytherins. Really enjoy this story.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 22 Feb 2010 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Anonymous)
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Terrific chapter! Please update quickly.
Smile, smile. I loved the imagery of the Slytherin children looking up to their head of house.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 21 Feb 2010 5:06 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Since I was just recalled back to work I know what you mean about the jobless aspect. Mentally I did change the check after fearsome scowl to priceless lol. Very good chapter, would removing the dark mark use that much of Harry's magic?
nice chapter...
but please update faster....
I spent this afternoon and this evening rereading your story! Have so so enjoyed it. Loved this chapter. But why does Severus remind me of a "TV preacher?" I can just imagine the uproar in that common room when three Griffs walked in. Oh I so want to know about his plan..........update soon.
Twenty seems like an awful lot of reviews for one chapter to me, but what do I know?
It was a really good chapter, though. I think that the bit about the Slytherins calling Snape father could be a bit clearer. Maybe put an actual statement in there--have him overhear one of the kids say something specific, like "we think of you like a father". I had to read it a couple of times to make sense of what you were saying, and I have a feeling that it was supposed to be a pretty meaningful statement.
Just a thought.
Do update soon! I'm glad to see you back :)
~Cait
Nicely done!!!! Can't wait to see if Harry can remove the Dark Mark and how all 4 of them will help the Slytherins.
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