This chapter was really good. You should write more.
I liked the chapter. But I hope you update soon...please? *hopeful puppy-dog eyes.*
I really don't know what part I liked best. . . so much wonderful stuff. The "brothers" incident was so much fun. Then seeing Harry hoist that idiot into the air. . .Telling Pansy to "make one up." was absolutely brilliant. . . and that final scene--destroying everything but protecting everyone-amaizing.
Your creativitiy is truely amazing.
V.
This was bound to happen eventually. Why..oh WHY, didn't that idiot shut up? Blaise doesn't realize just how much Harry really does care. Harry wants to help them all and he is terrified of what he is capable of. I'm just glad that he now has Severus to keep him safe and centered. Blaise owes Hermione and Severus a debt of gratitude now; they saved his life, though, I'm not sure he deserved it. (Personally, I would have let him be shredded..no, that would hurt Harry; guess there will have to be a convenient accident arranged at some point instead.*evil smirk*)
I hope that the plan to ingratiate the Slytherins with the other houses will work. I just have this fear that some people will react like that one group did and treat them badly. It's really sad that so many people believe that all Slytherins are bad people without even bothering to get to know them.
I loved Harry's little comment about him and Draco being brothers and Severus' following query was hilarious. I wonder if he realizes what he practically implied?
Great chapter!
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| 28 Feb 2010 9:55 pm
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I loved the potion class and harry nearly shattering the room but the best part was Neville getting his potion right that deserves a mention!
Thank you for updating
| Title: Chapter 20
| 28 Feb 2010 10:03 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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First, love the way Sirius and Sev are now related, well, they are adopting "brothers", right. Can't wait to see the first time Sirius grins and calls sev something "family oriented". Really love Hermione in this one, and Blaise needs to be hurt! What a first day. Great chapter.
Wow, what a burst of temper and magic. If I was worrying about all that I would have a major melt down too. Great chapter, great descriptions. Draco and Harry brothers, love how Harry reasoned that out. What are Sirius and Sev, mom and dad now???
you're a goofball.
Really good chappie. Harry's defense of Snape is true to form, as are his bouts of anger. Sucks that he cried in front of his classmates, they're all gonna think he's a total nutter.
poor harry, he is so conflicted...i am glad he has sev and the rest of his 'family'
Oh this was a great chapter! I really liked HArry's offer to remove Severus' dark mark and his observation that Dumbledore does just say "It can't be done" without even trying anything.
Salazar's Light is fabulous, I can see it in my head. And Severus' reason for dousing the fire, torches and candles is something I honestly would never have thought of for myself, though once you pointed it out, it made perfect sense.
But the absolute best part is how gob-smacked Severusis at being referred to as "Father" by his little snakes.
I loved it!
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