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Title: Chapter 10 24 Apr 2009 2:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, it must be so traumtic for him to relive all that trauma with the Dursleys. I'm glad that Sirius and Remus are not too upset that Harry is with Severus now. I loved their dropped jaws when they saw Sev comforting Harry.

    I'm looking forward to your net update.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review!!! I'm so glad you liked it. I actually thought it was a bit boring, but I must just be barmy. I hope to have another update up soon!

    ObsessiveaboutSnape

Title: Chapter 9 18 Apr 2009 12:49 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha - waiting to hear what Sirius and Lupin make of this Snape!
Title: Chapter 9 27 Mar 2009 3:24 pm
Reviewer: serenblack17 (Signed) [Report This]
    You have to finish this. I absolutely adore it! I'll even beta it for you. Please just continue writing this. Your Snape is completely believable even given the circumstances. It's a little rough but I read that you were having beta problems so that explains that.

    Author's Response:

    Tank you so much for your review, and your offer!!! I'mm so glad you think Snape is beleiveable! People keep asking if he's schizo....... I'd love to have a beta, but I write sporadically, and so it is usually a bit of a wait between updates. I have the next chapter about halfway done now though, and so I can send what I ave to you (because hwo knows when I'll get around to finishing it) or I could wait till I'm done. Whicever you prefer. Let me know whenever you decide!

     

Title: Chapter 9 17 Mar 2009 8:01 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story!!! Please please update!! I especially love how Severus acknowledges that his voices aren't real, yet still addresses them like separate people. ROFL!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Thanks so much!!! Nearly everyone keeps asking if Sev's a schizo, and he's not, he just talks to imaginary voices in his head........is that so odd???

    I'll try to update soon, or as soon as I can. Thanks again!!

Title: Chapter 8 11 Mar 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I still don't like the voices thing. Are you implying he has schizophrenia?
Title: Chapter 6 11 Mar 2009 8:19 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Getting better and better!
Title: Chapter 4 11 Mar 2009 8:03 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 11 Mar 2009 7:50 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're a great writer, but I find the dialogue within Severus's head really distracting--you know, the Two and Three. I don't think you need that. It is confusing and distracting and hard to follow.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Mar 2009 7:30 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This looks promising!
Title: Chapter 9 11 Mar 2009 4:05 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was really sweet with Sev holding Harry and trying to comfort him. But now that it seems that harry's been assaulted or molested by his cousin, Severus needs to get the boys professional help. They need a good dose of therapy with a Mind Healer and Severus probably knows a good one.

    Or you could borrow my Healer Sue from my Snow Girl story, we could say she slipped through a hole into a parallel universe, like they did on Star Trek.

    But Severus shouldn't be made to deal with the two of them himself, it's too much for the poor man to handle, plus teach and spy . . .he'll have a breakdown. Then they'll all end up in St. Mungos, right next to the Longbottoms.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmmm.............I was battling with the idea of Harry just being a bit clingy rater than in emotional tatters for this bit, you know, after I considered not putting this bit in at all, but now I'm ot too sure. I probably should start some kind of counseling, but I really REALLY wanted to keep it between Harry and Sev. I was tinking, if he HAD to be treated, ten Sev could use his Occlumency/Legilimency training as a sort of therpy. PROPER training, mind you.

     And Sev won't be spying anymore. When I explain Draco's information later you'll see why. and lol. Suc dire predictions you have!! I promise, none of our boys will end up in Mungo's, at least not for anything mental healt related. :D

    Thank you so much for the review!!


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