Okay, there is something serious wrong with Draco and I can't figure it out right now. But Voldy singing and Draco screaming that he did believe in fairies was hilarious!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 11 Mar 2009 3:16 am
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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I like it, I really do! But be careful not to put too much into it! Harry's horrors are quite enough and you've already added Draco's trauma as well and Hermione's weired assumptions and so on and so forth. I think you should try to solve some of the situations a bit before adding more to the mix. Else it might get a bit confusing. Now we'll have to deal with Sirius and Remus, the papers, Albus later on I guess, the Weasley's reaction as well - quite a few battlefields... I hope you won't get too tangled in all that, it would be really sad because I love the story so far!
Author's Response: *sighI yes....yes....I will make sure to clear up at least a few of them, mainly Hermione's issues and the herd of Weasleys, in the very near future. Siri and Remy are in the next chapter, as well as the Prophet, and maybe....a Slytherin conversation, but not between who you think. But that last one won''t probably come up till chapter eleven. Also, I'm really trying to get the school year started. Can you imagine? Nearly ten chapters and not a single class. WOW!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 10 Mar 2009 9:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Ara (Anonymous)
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Vampire butterflies!! amazing, love them! but then Draco spends so much time and effort being in absolute self control, surely he'll have an eccentricity hidden there somewhere?
Got to feel sorry for Harry though; Mione goes weird on him, he saves the sanity of a house-elf and then steps into his guardian's quarters for the first time only to have his nemesis throw himself into his arms. Poor guy. He is acting his age though so you're alright there.
Thanks for posting :)
| Title: Chapter 9
| 10 Mar 2009 7:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Ara (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is developing very nicely. It's always pleasing to see Harry, even an older Harry, acting like a proper child, such as he wasn't when he was a small child. I like your Severus as well, he certainly does manage well with Harry, and I wouldn't be surprised to see him doing a lot of pretending to be big bad Potions Master to keep everyone else on their toes! And next Serius and Remus' response to Severus' guardianship? Bruised egos and sensibilities ahead! This will be fun!
And now I'll go back a chapter or two because I don't remember Draco meeting Severus and Harry...
Thank you for writing and good luck in your exams :)
Omg! Dudley tou..touched him? Oooh, (shudder, shudder)!
I like how you've had Snape and Harry's relationship evolve. Poor Draco, poor Harry, poor Snape that he has to deal with the two of them and their horrific pasts! Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, they're all poor, poor dudes....*sigh*
| Title: Chapter 9
| 10 Mar 2009 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: Leigh Stone (Anonymous)
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Great story. I am confused about one thing. Is Severus a schizophrenic or is there another explanation for his voices?
Author's Response: Lol! Tank you for the review. ANd no, Sev isnt a Schizo, he's just plain crazy, is all.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 10 Mar 2009 3:00 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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One of the most wonderful Severus saves Harry fics out there. The best thing aside from the most delightful portrayals of both Severus and Harry is the lack of extreme details on what Harry went through. You have portrayed the horror without making your readers sick, something others need to pay attention too. Severus is simply wonderful--I love the voices in his head. What is up with Dumbledore--has he been polyjuiced?
Author's Response: :D:D:D:D TEE-Hee-Hee Thanks you so much for your wonerful review. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm blushing with your praise, ok? Sevies voices are.....absolutely brilliant ok, and they practically write themselves. And I tried not to go into details, even though my earlier chapter was kind of extreme. And Dumbledore....... is a prick in this fic, actually......Hmmmm..... Thanks again!!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Mar 2009 1:19 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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i don't want hug draco.but i want hug harry.poor boy.his life very difficult.i hope snape care about harry than draco. sorry i really don^t like draco when snape is harry' stories ,he come right now.
Interesting. Your Severus is a bit soft, but as long as he has a reason to be, I think this will be good. I'm guessing that Harry reminds him of himself at that age? Anyway, good start. I look forward to reading more.
-P.G.
Good chapter! Yay for Snape hugging Harry :)
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