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Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 11:44 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter (as have been all the others). I like the idea of Cornelius being Severus' brother. And I adore Harry's T-shirt (as does my resident feline Bailey). The conversation with Merlin was wonderful (why am I not surprised that it was Dumbledore who was asking questions about power?) and I also liked Neil's explanation that there is a difference in him believing something personally and believing something officially. You know, the idea that the Minister is just a voice box for the Wizengamot is a good one and explains why he is always coming to Dumbledore for things. There would be a bit of resentment as well which would explain a lot of the the Minister's actions in the books.

    Bravo!

    Author's Response: Thank you so very very much!! I'm so happy you liked it. I loved using Fudge as Sev's brother, as I've never seen anyone else do that.  :) I haven't got any pets, but I've fallen in love with a website named Icanhascheezeburger.com where they feature cats being the obnoxious lovable monsters they are. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I hope to keep you interested, and that I don't take so long with the next one.
Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, that was certainly unexpected! Fudge and Snape as brothers?! They really are quite different. They share only the mother I presume?
    Does Dumbledore know about this connection? It might just give Harry the chance to liberate hinmself rnough from Albus' reign to become his own person! I'm intrigued! Please update soon! I want to read more - about Draco as well!

    Author's Response: Thank you Yes, they have different fathers, and no, Dumbledore has no idea. X) Of course Harry is going to have all sorts of fun with a new uncle to spoil him rotten :D More Draco next capter, promise!
Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 9:07 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What an unexpected twist to the story and yes I like your version of Snape's brother.

    Author's Response: thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 7:30 pm
Reviewer: silent_soliloquy318 (Signed) [Report This]
    ...Fudge? Lol, I would love to see where this going with Fudge as Severus' brother. While Severus is a little sympathetic and mushy in this fic--I love it! :) (He was tender with Lily after all) There is a repetitive use of child, but it keeps reminding Snape in his thoughts that Harry is indeed a child. Harry is so sweet in this fic and Severus so protective, I want to cry. I hope they both escape Dumbledore's clutches, he is a manipulative old man whether sympathetic in canon or not.

    Author's Response:

    Is he really that mushy??? Oh wow, I'll have to Snape him up a bit then. 'Child' just sounds like something Sev would say, don't you think? Awww I'm sorry, but I'm not sure I should be sorry if I made you cry. Especially if they're good tears....

    Dumbles will not be a threat to them much longer, promise. 

Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 2:50 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    fudge is snape' brother.its very suprise.im glad snape guardian harry
    i hope draco keep away from snape and harry.i couldnt help but i dont like him

    Author's Response:

    *gasp* You don't like Draco?!?!?!?! Well, then, this fic is going to be very uncomfortable for you.....

    Thanks for the review though!!!

Title: Chapter 6 14 Dec 2008 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I wrote a review before but my internet went down, and it disappeared!

    I'm so glad that you've updated again! Another well-written chapter! I can't believe that Fudge is Sev's brother. Yuk!

    Please don't wait so long for the next update, this story is great!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review, both this one and the one I didn't et because your internet was being a meanie. Yuk? You don't like Sev and Neil??? They play really well together, at least the way I plan on having them.....

    I'll try to have another update up quicker. Thanks again!!!!

Title: Chapter 5 20 Nov 2008 10:08 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For a Snape save Harry I had found it is totally wonderful. I will be looking forward for more chapters to come.

    Author's Response: Well I'm very glad I could entertain you! I hope you stay tuned and that every chapter to come brings something new for you to enjoy. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 5 12 Nov 2008 3:28 am
Reviewer: Ramos (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I so hope they thwart the old bugger.
Title: Chapter 5 11 Nov 2008 6:36 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to the next part and meeting Snape's mysterious brother.
Title: Chapter 2 10 Nov 2008 3:32 pm
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "it was then that he discovered the mysterious origin of Harry's makeshift blanket" - a marvellous line. A very droll and witty story.

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