| Title: Chapter 3
| 09 Jun 2013 10:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Lilly (Anonymous)
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I love you! I love your writing and the conversations. Never had to laugh like this before while reading!
It's very funny how they interact with Severus and expecially the last chapter was great. That's it with Snapes great plan to make Dumbledore search for a new guardian because of Harry don't want him. :D
regards, Lilly
Harry is such an endearing boy - of course Snape will find himself agreeing to take care of him! I enjoyed the opening sequence outside of the Gryffindor tower in particular - Gryffindor bravery meets Slytherin cunning - Slytherin may win, but those Gryffidors still got their points in the end!
Author's Response: LOL! I know what you mean about the Gryff/Slyth contretemps... As you'll see, the 2 Houses will feature fairly prominently in some of the later chapters.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 14 Nov 2008 10:06 pm
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| Reviewer: mwc (Signed)
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OMG, i LOVE this fic. severus arguing with the fat lady, demanding that the gryffindors "produce potter," the ridiculously cascading misunderstanding in the infirmary, and the conversation between harry and big bad i-don't-want-to-be-your-guardian-yes snape. i wasn't sure when i read the fic summary if i would be interested (it is a little weak), but i'm so glad i decided to read a little. the first two chapters were good but this chapter puts it on another plane of fiction. absolute rating of 10, nothing less. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow - I'm really delighted you enjoyed the story so much! I hope subsequent chapters continue to please. :)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 01 Nov 2008 11:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Leticia Lara (Anonymous)
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This is great. I only have a comment.
At this moment Harry has not been chosen as seeker, but his house mates said that Snape is going to disable the seeker.
Author's Response: Oooooh! Great catch! I've fixed that error. Thanks for pointing it out. :)
Ha ha ha ha ha... Yes, Severus! Way to go! LOL
Really great chapter of really great fanfiction. Severus is himself and he is sooo funny... LOL, really.
I love it. I've never got enough of your story. And although I know there is another chapter, I'm already waiting for more ;-).
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. :) Great to hear the characterization of Sev works!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 24 Oct 2008 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: tortilla lady (Anonymous)
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So far it's great!! please update soon, your doing a fabulous job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! One update, coming up!
Poor Snape. And he was so sure that Harry wouldn't want him. Looks like he's a new Daddy! ;)
Author's Response: I know! Break out the cigars! :)
and he said "yes", i said "wow", he said "when", i said "how about right now? love, can't wait, then i asked if he believed in fate and he said yes" ~ Brad Paisley/ Chad Brock
Author's Response: Very apropos!
I love the early days of Severus and Harry getting to know each other, its always so sweet and fumbling : )
The bit with Snape collecting Harry from the common room made me chuckle, it was amusing how half the gryffindor house were trying to protect him from being turned into potions ingrediants lol.
Author's Response: I prefer the early days myself - I'm glad you liked the scene at the Tower! Thanks for letting me know it worked! :)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 22 Oct 2008 11:57 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Oohhhh I completely and utterly and totally love this!! Very funny and sweet and warm at the same time, more more more!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
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