aw, harry's so cute, and snape totally is a mother hen. adorable!
Author's Response: Ha ha ha! That's a great description of Severus! :)
lol. I loved this chapter. I so hope you update soon. Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to be better about updating more regularly.
Ooh, exciting end there. I loved your rendition of the troll attack - most original I've ever come across, especially the tobogganing! I'm really glad you put up two chapters instead of one, but somehow I seem to have read through them both even faster than usual. Hmm, must have been the exciting action! I do want to find out what Harry and Snape have to say to each other, as well as what will happen about the Quidditch match. Please update soon - these chapters are as brilliant as always!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very flattered by your comments. :) Hope you enjoy the later chapters as well. :)
Troll in the dungeon indeed! The images of the trio scurrying down halls encouraged by the paintings, the troll saying one of the few words it probably knows, and the toboggan ride are just great! The trio bursting into tears when it was all over just seems like such a normal kid thing to do. Ron claiming that "uncle" Snape was to handle his punishment shows that he is not nearly as dense as some may think - and maybe has a little Slytherin in him!
Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm so glad you liked it! I quite agree that Ron was pretty clever in insisting his "uncle" and not his brothers get first crack at him. :) I'm delighted to hear you enjoyed the troll encounter in this AU and that you found the kids' reaction to be refreshingly normal. I always thought the kids in canon were a little too stoic considering all the horrors they saw!
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