o.o reading about severus getting attacked by nanagi was scary BUT the ending for this chapter is so cute! =)
Oops. I meant to give to a "10" but I messed up. Here it is.
I dearly love this story. Snape's voice, while not exactly canon, is a believable metamorphisis from the bitter, cruel person he was. Harry is sweet and funny. Sometimes he seems a bit younger than 11, but then he is finally being given the chance to be a child, he has every excuse to regress a bit and enjoy it.
I particulary appreciate the fact that you update in segments. It's nice to know that you aren't going to leave us hanging for long. Please keep up the fantastic work.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 27 Jun 2009 7:43 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Sev in charge of discipline i can see, sirius a teacher, can't wait to see. Should be very interesting to see the trouble harry gets in w/ sirius and how lupin and snape handle it. great chapter.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 26 Jun 2009 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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Awwwwwwww. And by that I mean extremely awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. You are almost at a playing deck count here. Will it come to a Tarot deck count? (I wish it would! The story is like a pack of candy one can't stop eating.)
The last couple chapters have been great-- I'm behind of reviewing because I've been out of town. I liked the Nagini POV last chapter-- and her sticky end in this one. It was nice to see that the kids are impulsive and tempted to do dangerous things, but not blindly jumping into the basilisk hole. The ending for this chapter was as sweet as candy floss.
I'm excited about the possibilities of having Lupin and Black in the castle-- especially when they have a more ambivalent relationship with Harry.
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