I must be a baby since I cried like one reading this chapter.
This has become one of my absolutely favorite stories! I laughed SO often throughout at the way you expressed things -- this goes beyond merely good writing; this is sheer genius!
My favorite aspect from beginning to end concerned the wonderful juxtaposition of Harry's and Severus' feelings, both working from opposite points of view over the same incidents, so that we see how each character feels, and how wonderfully they blend, even though they see things in totally different ways. (I know that sounds hopelessly generalized, but I also know that YOU know what I mean. Or, at least, I HOPE so!!!)
I loved the scene with Quirrel's turban more than words can express! I was afraid the plan would go awry and they couldn't pull it off, but when they DID -- I couldn't stop laughing!
Lord Volauvent! *snort* And Lord Voldesnort!! *snicker* And... the list goes on! I was actually ready to go to bed when I got the the AK scene, so then I had to actually FINISH the story... *shakes head* All I can say is -- what is that word again??? SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS! (sp?) (Gred to Forge: "Say that five times faster!")
Thanks SO MUCH for the incredible read! :-D
(The rating only goes to 10, but I'd give this a 25+, if I could!)
This is the second time I've read this, although the first time was not here. It was even better this time round...and I just know that I'll say the same thing after the third! Thank you.
You made me cry...darn, but you're good!
LOL ok I'm restin, I'm restin!
Too cute
I love their inner monologues..how Harry thinks Snape is thinking one thing but hes actually thinking something, and vice versa when it comes to Severus...Super sweet
Thanks...This was the first Harry/Snape guardian story I had ever read. I'd forgotten the name but I had remembered the girl almost castrating the boy who attacked Harry...Found this by chance again...It is truly my favorite Harry/Snape guardian Story out of all that I've read...Really good lol
Title: Chapter 64
| 03 Aug 2011 3:52 am
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Reviewer: Vanime (Anonymous)
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Hey will there be a sequel? I really enjoyed this story soooo much!
Hugs and Love, Vanime
This story is amazing - I love how you used cannon elements from all 7 books and put them in one story.
Throughout I found myself crying and laughing and cheering.
I am glad all the characters got a happy ending - much better than DH
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