great chapter and a good chat between sev and harry, i hope sev has got through to harry about the dursleys abuse of him and i hoope harry has taken it all in
Author's Response: Thank you! Of course, in real life abuse is never as quickly forgotten or recovered from as it is in fiction, but hopefully this story will be able to carry it off... :)
Sweet. "Little monster", "little horror" and 500 lines for speaking about Dursleys. Very good. And spanking... for troll, I suppose. It's only two months till Halloween... I hope Harry will understand Severus more till that day. I really hope they will understand each other.
So... When is next chapter? I'm hungry... ;-)
Author's Response: Next chapter coming up!
Ha ha ha ha ha... Yes, Severus! Way to go! LOL
Really great chapter of really great fanfiction. Severus is himself and he is sooo funny... LOL, really.
I love it. I've never got enough of your story. And although I know there is another chapter, I'm already waiting for more ;-).
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. :) Great to hear the characterization of Sev works!
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| 24 Oct 2008 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: tortilla lady (Anonymous)
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So far it's great!! please update soon, your doing a fabulous job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! One update, coming up!
Poor Snape. And he was so sure that Harry wouldn't want him. Looks like he's a new Daddy! ;)
Author's Response: I know! Break out the cigars! :)
and he said "yes", i said "wow", he said "when", i said "how about right now? love, can't wait, then i asked if he believed in fate and he said yes" ~ Brad Paisley/ Chad Brock
Author's Response: Very apropos!
I love the early days of Severus and Harry getting to know each other, its always so sweet and fumbling : )
The bit with Snape collecting Harry from the common room made me chuckle, it was amusing how half the gryffindor house were trying to protect him from being turned into potions ingrediants lol.
Author's Response: I prefer the early days myself - I'm glad you liked the scene at the Tower! Thanks for letting me know it worked! :)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 22 Oct 2008 11:57 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Oohhhh I completely and utterly and totally love this!! Very funny and sweet and warm at the same time, more more more!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
i love this! the idea of co-parenting with the weasleys is a brilliant original idea, i cant wait for the next chapter to see how harry takes the news of being snapes new ward, hope you can update soon : )
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you are enjoying it. I'll update in the next few days!
Oh, I LIKE this! What an excellent follow-up to Harry's First Detention. I feel so sorry for Severus. He must be feeling very put upon between Albus and the Weasleys. And of course, he still has to talk to Harry about it all. As snarky and growly as he is I can't help but feel sympathetic. You are such a good writer and it is really showing here.
Author's Response: Thank you for your very kind compliment. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story!
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