That is too funny. Three first-years, defeating the Dark Lord? With basic spells and *Quidditch moves*, not blood magic like Lily used? I guess Lucius Malfoy is sorted now.
"Snape drifted off to sleep, his last thought the memory of Harry’s expression as he lovingly touched his new broom."
Oh, yeah. He doesn't care *at all*...
Oh, dear Merlin, this is truly, utterly hilarious. Really, *really* funny. Love the characterization, too; I hate it when Snape relents too quickly for Harry. He's telling himself how much he hates the lad, and is so obviously loving being a father...it's too cute.
| Title: Chapter 64
| 21 Jun 2010 5:24 am
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| Reviewer: Bobbejean (Anonymous)
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This was an absolutely fabulous story!! I loved how you took so many things from the 'canon' and melded them into your story. It was great!! I also thought that you had Severous' personality and speech patterns spot on!! Truly amazing and I am so pleased to have been able to read the whole thing at once.
I'd love to read more stories you have authored.
Bobbejean@msn.com
its amazing that what JK did in 7 years, you did in two. The ending left me colmpletly satisfied, unlike cannon which btw I hated. Overall the story was amazing, good job :)
Nice, but James's whacking Harry was....uncalled for. Well, and Sev didn't have to go away too (sniffle for Harry). Otherwise, it's gr8 - gr8 humour and angst and drama....just GR8.
Loved this story. The little articles that Snape made in his head had me rolling. Also the way Snape kept coming up with alternate reasons why he was feeling things was great. Hope you keep writing and if you do publish anything, I'd really like to read that as well. Good luck.
Brilliant!! And so long!! Kuddos!!
| Title: Chapter 64
| 16 Apr 2010 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: Riverlover90@yahoo.com (Anonymous)
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This story was absolutely AMAZING!!!! I couldn't stop reading once I started. Unlike some other stories this one was excellently written with a great plot too. The only downside is that I would have preferred a sequel to an epilogue. But that's only because I am greedy and don't want to stop reading your work. Thank you so much for sharing this story with me. I quite enjoyed the dual perspective. Such as how you had Snape's perspective on being too harsh and Harry's perspective on Snape being too lenient. I also enjoyed the way you made the story flow even when you sped up the original books to get it all done in just about one year. Usually it feels rushed but you did an excellent job of having the characters give the reasons for their actions. All I can say is that the rating of 10 is almost too little. I hope you keep enjoying writing and sharing your awesome ability.
| Title: Chapter 46
| 04 Apr 2010 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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HA! Now THAT would be an AWESOME detention! God...if only WE had detentions like THAT in school! Lmao that would have been so awesome. Okay. I'm repeating myself. Sorry...but I can't help but giggle at these scenes...they're to fun!
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