| Title: The Past and the Present
| 01 Oct 2008 3:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous)
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This is certainly turning out to be an interesting story. I like how your idea is original, and the mystery behind Shadow. You're definitely improving chapter by chapter and the way you ended this chapter, I absolutely can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope the next one meets up to your expectations. You shouldn't have long to wait!
wow. what a cliffy! it was just as good as the last one and i am looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, the cliffy was not intended, it just happened I swear! Chapter three up soon!
| Title: The Past and the Present
| 01 Oct 2008 7:36 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Ye evil cliffie!!!
Author's Response: heh heh. Next chapter up soon though!
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