| Title: A Disappearing Dumbledore
| 19 Dec 2018 10:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Ooo! Wasn't expecting the last line! Snapity can be so obtuse some times *sigh* oh well! Nice chapter!
| Title: A Disappearing Dumbledore
| 19 Dec 2008 8:27 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow! What a cliffhanger! Love your Snape, but more so I really loved all the old Headmasters and Headmistresses in the portraits. They were done very well.
Author's Response: Thanks - they were fun to write. They will be making a reappearance... but not in this story!
Oh no, now they're in for it. Eventually I hope that Severus will come to terms with Harry. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Heh heh. Yes, Severus will... eventually. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: A Disappearing Dumbledore
| 30 Oct 2008 3:51 pm
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| Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, I'm glad you updated again
My favorite line in this one was definitely ‘Serves him right, the little shit!’ =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much - yup, I loved writing that line!
| Title: A Disappearing Dumbledore
| 30 Oct 2008 1:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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I like this story find that Harry is cute and I like Shadow.
The Ministry is under attack well Sev better get back home and lock up make sure that no one can get to Harry
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it - don't worry, Sev shouldn't be too long, as he's only stuck his head in the Floo.
Oh, boy! Death Eaters attacking the Ministry and Severus didn't know anything about it? That sounds very worrisome. Lucius is still under a bush in Little Whinging (the image that conjures up is hysterical)--and just who was the portrait with the long silver hair?--one of Malfoy's more reasonable ancestors? And poor Sev, getting floo-sick. I probably would as well. Even the idea of having my head in a different location than my body makes me feel uncomfortable.
This and the previous chapters have been great fun to read. You have a nice writing style and I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm enjoying writing this more and more. Some of the things in this chapter were pre-arranged (attack at the Ministry) but some were not (Malfoy + bush) I love that image as well. Yes, the long-haired headmaster was supposed to be another ancestor. The idea of a sensible Malfoy amid the chaos is nice. The Floo sickness was rather spontaneous, but I liked it and I'm glad you do to - I hope you continue to enjoy!
well, that's certainly a wrench in the gameplan, isn't it? that sucks, that does... lolz. poor snape, stuck w/ harry for ever so long. is the ministry thing important or just a way to detain albus, i wonder...
Author's Response: I thought it would spice things up a bit, and besides, it might be useful, it might not! Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: A Disappearing Dumbledore
| 29 Oct 2008 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I'm enjoying this story very much...
Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear it, thanks for the review!
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