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Reviews For Know Thyself
Snape stop being a git for once and try to see whats in front of your eyes. As smart as you are, especially since who have been abused as well you should recognize these signs right away. Please get over your schoolboy gurdge, its been 20 years since then for God's sake. Author, I love the story and Snape is, well Snape. lol. Love yourwriting style. It is so hard o find stories that actually are a joy to read. Thank you for writing this and allowing us to see Harry Potter from your point of view.
Author's Response: I love confusing him - it's a very addictive passtime.
-P.G. Author's Response: He heard Harry talking to 'himself' and I reckon it was all those years of hiding from the Dursleys that made Harry so quick. You're right - he really should have been sleeping, but when has Harry ever done something that's good for him?
I love the interaction between Harry and Shadow. Especially the bit where Shadow writes his message backwards on the paper and shows it to Harry lol. That was a great moment. I think you are characterizing Harry and Shadow nicely. :) And poor Snape. He's such a conflicted character. I hope DD clears up some of his insecurities soon! Sooo, now that Harry can hear Shadow, is he going to tell him how he knows that their father is still alive? ...Or was this answered already? I can't remember at the moment *goes to re-read* Oh, btw, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D Author's Response: I'm really glad you like my story - I started it with the sole idea of trying to make it different from everyone else's. I love the Harry and Shadow bits too, and there will be more next chapter. Shadow doesn't know who their father is either, but there will be more evidence along the way. Snape will be taken off the hook soon, I promise! Thanks so much for your long review!
Author's Response: I got sick of the idea that Harry must either have black or brown hair because of his parents - so I've done a mixture. A kind of coppery dark brown colour. Harry is Snape's son in this story, and I promise everything will be explained by the end. Thanks for reviewing and glad you like!
I wonder if "Let me hear Shadow" means only Harry will hear him or if Severus will hear Shadow too... Snape is lovely. Softening up and don’t realising it’s happening. Lol. You can have big fun with it (and your readers with you). Mila Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'm really getting into the swing of things now, and though Sev is not as easy to write, I love doing his part of the chapter as much as Harry/Shadow. The magic does have an interesting side effect... Hopefully the next update won't take too long!
Shadow speaking is bound to make things interesting - I look forward to seeing what he tells Harry. Author's Response: I think the 'yet' may definitely be a possibility (!) However, it may not be the Manor... Shadow should be fun to write from now on, and hopefully the next chapter won't take too long! Thanks for reviewing. |
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