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Reviews For Know Thyself
Author's Response: Yay, I got a poke! Err... not too sure. Maybe it looked sad? Glad you liked :D
Also, why doesn't Harry ask Shadow about his dad? He can now, but maybe he's forgotten. Sorry if my review sounds like a bit of a downer--I really do like your story. I wouldn't have read this far if I didn't. I'm also excited to find out how Snape is going to react to the situation in the morning. -P.G. Author's Response: Oh, I only made Severus open the cupboard as a last resort. You know when you open the most ridiculous place when you're frustrated about not being to find something? Well, yeah, and then the 'Harry's room' written in crayon caught his eye, making him have a closer look. Also - Shadow's already said that he doesn't know anything about who it is even though he does know that it's someone other than James. Anyway, I don't mind answering queries etc, so keep them coming :) Thanks for reviewing!
I can't wait for Harry's and Snape's conversation!(I assume they're having one in the morning?...! :P) Author's Response: Yes, indeed! However, I think Severus will protect Harry's privacy - remembering his own rather similar upbringing - and though they may touch on the subject, they won't necessarily talk it through until they know each other better. Hopefully you will like my method just as much! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you - it's so much fun being original and I'm glad you're enjoying it too!
I do like your characterization of Severus and I love Shadow. He's a hoot and the idea of him and Harry teaming up to prank Sev just makes m grin in anticipation. You write very well and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And I want Severus' library (not he dark arts books but the room. I'd love to have a large room to devote entirely to books). The best line was: His next words were said almost gently. “Next time don’t try to get out of writing about Austin’s second principle by simply leaving your work behind. Now, sleep. I expect to see you dressed by eight o’clock tomorrow.” Excellently done! Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Sev does have a lot of thinking to do, but it will be helped along by a bit of action in the next chapter! Hopefully you will like it - it requires a slightly softer side of Sev later in the chapter, but I don't want to overdo it, so please let me know if I've got him right when I finally post the next chapter. More Shadow next time as well - I'm glad you like him, I do too! That line was also my favourite:) Btw, be braced for a bit of angst coming up... just a little, though.
I like how you left the Dursley's fate somewhat of a mystery.. although I think it's safe to say they won't be returning home. I also like how Snape was informed of Harry's living arrangements with the Dursleys.. and I laughed a bit when he was just sitting in Harry's room.. staring lol Great job Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the 'Privet Drive scene'. Yes, the Dursleys have now disappeared of into a less than favourable sunset, but I will eventually tell of their fate. heh heh - I did warn you in the previous chapter! |
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