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Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 9:47 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Uh oh, Harry didn't tell Severus about the book absorbing into his skin! Can't wait to find out what it means! Also, I love how Severus is beginning to care for Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks - the book shall be explained in the coming chapters; after the Dumbledore incident of course!
Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it!!!

    Author's Response:

    Wonderful to hear! Thanks.

Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. First he is abused by the Durselys, now Snape hits him too! And it sounds like he spanked him hard too. But at least Snape sounds like he feels remorse for doing it, and he only did it because he was worried for Harry's safety. Kind of sweet really. I hope that Snape won't hit him again though.

    Despite the spanking, I love this chapter, we really get an insight into Snape's feelings towards Harry, and Harry's feelings of his own self-worth. Very well done. I'm sorry that I didn't review before, as I couldn't get my keyboard to work for some reason. But I had read it as soon as I saw it there.

    I'm very anxious to see where the story is going.

    Author's Response: I do feel sorry for Harry too - I didn't write the chapter for the spanking, I wrote it for setting up the consequences, so won't have to worry about it happening again! I'm glad your keyboard is better and thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 12:57 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is my favourite chapter so far!
    What was that book? Snape hasn't told Harry and I wonder : was it a Dark arts book or something else entirely?
    I'm glad Harry and Snape are getting on now, Harry could really use a reliable adult.
    I guess the broken mirror was Shadow quarreling with Harry... I'm sure he is furious because he didn't want Harry to look inside the box. Will Snape discover Shadow's presence? it could lead to him discovering Harry's powers...

    Author's Response:

    That's great to hear! The book isn't Dark Arts - it's something Snape thinks he has no use for... but he is wrong. It will be explained in later chapters.

    Have a chocolate frog! You've got it in one! Snape will find out about Shadow in the last few chapters of the story, leaving plenty of time for confusion and puzzlement in between... Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My favorite qoute in this cahpter is when Snape says to Harry:"There's that cheeky brat that I know and loathe." I love the way that your slowly making Snape realize that he cares for Harry. Alot of other authors tend to rush into these feeling instead of letting it graudally build up. Your a great writer and your quickly became one of my favorites. Keep writing and I'll be anxiously awaiting for a new chapter.

    Author's Response: I wanted to make my story worthwhile in the build-up, I'm glad you like that. Thank you very much, that's very sweet of you! Next chapter shouldn't take too long!
Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 6:09 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I didn't get what happened with the book...

    Author's Response: You will in future, I promise! For the time being just remember that it's been absorbed into Harry's skin...
Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 3:23 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, So what did Shadow throw at the mirror this time and What specifically did Harry tell him to make him that upset?

    And Sev noticed that the break "eemed to come from the other side" Good. He needs to start noticing something odd is going on.

    Looking forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    The mirror will be explained next chapter; just bear in mind these two words; irrational teenager. They do weird things when they're upset... Next chapter shouldn't take too long! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror 29 Nov 2008 1:55 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job, I liked how you handled the confrontation between them, it wasn't over the top. Both of them learned something and now they can improve their relationship. I like the way harry and Shadow are getting along too. Did Shadow break the mirror? And will we ever find out just what was in the black box?

    Author's Response: Thank you, that's nice to hear. Yes and yes to both your questions; the Shadow issue will be dealt with next chapter and the box one will be dealt with later on in the story (it's an important plot point after all!)

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