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Reviews For Know Thyself
Author's Response: Ah, thank you; that's very interesting - I suppose it could be said that Harry was 'hallucinating' as well, but it doesn't quite fit the story in the instance, so thanks for pointing that out!
Author's Response: It'll be a while before he and Harry get back together, but I will be giving bits and pieces on how he's doing!
The thing that's wrong with this is that Harry has already started to resemble Shadow before the spell was cast. You wrote that Snape noticed his hair changing a couple chapters back while Harry was asleep. Why did Harry start to make the transformation before Dumbledore cast the spell? I'm hoping that this has something to do with how Shadow comes back to life. I'll admit that I'm still slightly confused about the Greek story and will probably go back and read it again. I'm glad that Harry is safe though and that Shadow will somehow live. I think it would be cool if eventually Shadow got his own body and went to live with Harry and Snape: Harry could have a twin! That would be super cool. Anyway, I do feel bad about Harry's suffering. He lost someone very dear to him and that's got to hurt. I'm surprised that Severus took everything so well too. I thought he'd have more of a reaction to finding out that Harry has been talking to a different version of himself for quite some time now. I hope you go into his thoughts about the situation and his new fatherhood in the next chapter. Good work! -P.G. Author's Response: ... Drat! You always notice the little plot points people aren't supposed to remember until much later! Kudos to you though. Harry's 'twin' will resurface again, but not after I get Harry into a whole lot of new trouble in the next story. I hope you aren't confused about the Greek stuff the second time round, but if you are, let me know and I would be happy to try and explain it all! Severus will get his turn next chapter, I promise. Thanks for your lovely, long review!
Author's Response: I made myself utterly miserable writing this chapter! But, don't worry; Shadow is alive and kicking, he's just... elsewhere at the moment. Snape will get his turn next chapter and I hope that one will be a little nicer to read than this one was!
Aw, I don't know how to feel. On one hadn, I'm glad that Snape knows that Harry is his son, on the other hand, I 'm sad that Harry losts Shadow! Author's Response: Not in this case, but it could have been - you shall see! I made myself sad writing this chapter, but I will cheer things up again after Snape's had his say. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you - it's Snape's turn next!
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you found it enjoyable despite the depressing bits I put in! |
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