Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Dinner 25 Feb 2022 12:00 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, I’m looking forward to seeing how detention goes. Thanks for your interesting and well written story.
Title: Punishment 24 Feb 2022 11:56 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. That sounded painful.
Title: Dealing with The Chosen One 24 Feb 2022 11:53 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, why Harry?! I would definitely have chosen Dumbledore.
Title: Epilogue 05 Jun 2011 5:23 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Intertessting.
Title: Epilogue 15 Dec 2010 12:42 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    That story was really good! It was different than I expected it to be, but it captured my attention nontheless! Great job!
Title: Dealing with The Chosen One 14 Dec 2010 10:11 pm
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh! This is awesome so far!
Title: An Interesting Read 08 Aug 2010 6:32 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story is a very good one. I find it a little difficult personally to read, because you are portraying Snape consistent with canon's version of him, and I have realized that I truly want my fanfic to show a "redeemed" Severus. He shouldn't end up fluffy, but I do like to see him realize that he has misunderstood Harry and come to love him. Even though your Snape does come to respect Harry a little bit, he still sees him negatively. I was angry at the bit where he read Harry's essay about Draco trying the cruciatus curse and Snape thought "I need to talk to Draco about his foolishness." Yet Harry had to be punished severely for using an unknown curse that hurt Draco. I would have liked Snape to realize his hypocrisy in regards to the two boys.

    But it is a good story.

    Author's Response:

    I understand what you mean. Yes, it had been my aim from the beginning to keep Snape as close to canon as possible. A tiny bit of mutual respect and understanding - not more.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Epilogue 13 May 2009 2:09 am
Reviewer: bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry I havent reviewed in aages.. lol

    I really want to give an honest opinion, I hope I'm not too harsh. So sorry if I am.

    First I have to say that I really wasn't expecting an ending like that. It was good, and you're a really great writer and everything, it just didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the story (or for me at least). Soo for me it was a little out of place there. The whole story was kind of like all these little interactions between Snape and Harry (where their feelings are the main focus) and them WHAMM a huge action scene.. lol

    It felt kind of strange...

    And I really had enjoyed how you focused so much on their feelings in the previous chapters. That was actually what I liked so much about your stories. But anyway, you still did a great job writing the ending, and I'm glad that you wrote this story, I really enjoyed it.

    Also, I hope you write another one. Because I think you're an excellent writer and I'd love to read more of your ideas.

    Thanks for the great story :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review! Don't worry, I don't think you were too harsh, I can understand what you mean. I hope the fact that you didn't like the epilogue so much won't prevent you from reading it from Harry's perspective...
Title: Epilogue 11 May 2009 3:02 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    ....sorry but..poor ending to a good story. Seeing it from Snape's point of veiw just increased my greif for Albus's death. :'(

    Author's Response:

    So, what do I say? Sorry you didn't like the end, glad you liked the rest of the story...

    Yes, Albus's death is very sad, but as he said, Snape did what he had to do...

Title: Punishment 01 May 2009 4:56 pm
Reviewer: AN ITALIAN READER - CHIARA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG !!! SNAPE IS VERY STERN BUT IN SOMEHOW I THINK THAT HE FEEL HIMSELF LIKE A DISGUSTING MAN IN DOING IT ,ALSO IF THE BOY IS HARRY => JAMES POTTER'S SON . BY THE END I THINK THAT THIS STORY IS A GOOD STORY AND I HOPE THAT THEIR RELATIONSHIP WILL CHANGE A IN A VERY FRIENDLY MODE ! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE TO WRITE .
    ps:I'M ITALIAN AND NOT VERY GOOD IN ENGLISH WRITING BUT I HOPE THAT I MADE MY SELF CLEAR :-) LOVE CHIARA

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