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Reviews For Sectumsempra - Snape's Perspective
But it is a good story. Author's Response: I understand what you mean. Yes, it had been my aim from the beginning to keep Snape as close to canon as possible. A tiny bit of mutual respect and understanding - not more. Thanks for reviewing!
I really want to give an honest opinion, I hope I'm not too harsh. So sorry if I am. First I have to say that I really wasn't expecting an ending like that. It was good, and you're a really great writer and everything, it just didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the story (or for me at least). Soo for me it was a little out of place there. The whole story was kind of like all these little interactions between Snape and Harry (where their feelings are the main focus) and them WHAMM a huge action scene.. lol It felt kind of strange... And I really had enjoyed how you focused so much on their feelings in the previous chapters. That was actually what I liked so much about your stories. But anyway, you still did a great job writing the ending, and I'm glad that you wrote this story, I really enjoyed it. Also, I hope you write another one. Because I think you're an excellent writer and I'd love to read more of your ideas. Thanks for the great story :) Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review! Don't worry, I don't think you were too harsh, I can understand what you mean. I hope the fact that you didn't like the epilogue so much won't prevent you from reading it from Harry's perspective...
Author's Response: So, what do I say? Sorry you didn't like the end, glad you liked the rest of the story... Yes, Albus's death is very sad, but as he said, Snape did what he had to do...
ps:I'M ITALIAN AND NOT VERY GOOD IN ENGLISH WRITING BUT I HOPE THAT I MADE MY SELF CLEAR :-) LOVE CHIARA |
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