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Reviews For Sectumsempra - Snape's Perspective
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks alot!
Yep, this ending was indeed sad :( Poor Severus, having to do that dreaded task, and Harry feeling so betrayed. But as you said, thinking on it all it'd be rather impossible to end this on a happy note. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story!
Author's Response: Hi, thank you for your feed back and no, of course I don't mind your honest opinion. I can understand your criticism, and in fact I had expected that some people would feel this way. (In fact I had been wondering whether I should write the epilogue at all.) Yes, Harry had started to appreciate Snape to some extent, but that didn't change what Snape had to do, and so instead of just hating him, Harry is left with more disappointment (concerning Snape) than in canon and with some doubt. Will DH go on as usual or will Harry's doubt make a difference? Tha's up to the reader's imagination. I know it's a very sad ending, but I had the feeling another ending would have been unrelistic. It's war, there's never enough opportunity to say everything you should say and Snape did what he had to do. The fact that he now values Harry's opinion makes it even harder for him... I hope the fact that you didn't like the epilogue won't deter you from reading it in the twin story once I've updated that one?
Im not exactly sure what an epilogue is but im sure i can wait until you get it exactly how you want it. Afterall, as you said, whats the point of writing a rushed one if its going to turn out crappy? ((Although im sure that wont happen!)) Anyway, I'll say it again (because i cant remember exactly what i said last time and what i didnt) but your story was really well thought out. I actually didnt mind the caning, i mean, i wasnt thrilled by it, but it didnt seem to affect the story that much. I guess if you DID leave that out (IF you wrote another story, that is) youd probably get more reviewers since alot seemed to be put-off by the caning. I was reading through the other reviews and plenty of people seemed to be really offended by that particular part... Yeah, but anyway, it would be really awesome if youd write another! Author's Response: I am glaad that you liked the story, and I hope you'll like the epilogue as well....
I loved this chapter the best! :) You are a very talented writer, and I would love to see a sequel to this story. Perhaps without the caning though! Maybe Snape becoming Harry's guardian or something like that. Hint hint! I will definitely be looking forward to more stories from you, that is sure! Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think I'll write a sequel, but I might write something else...
It really showed the "inside" of the conversation! Really great series keep it up! I sure hope you keep writing even after this story is done! Author's Response: Thank you! About keeping writing after the story is finished, yes I might...
And waiting neverously for new chapters. =) |
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