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Reviews For Sectumsempra - Snape's Perspective
Oooh, shivers down my spine. I'm amazed DD allowed this! 10 is so harsh; shame on you Sev! Nice work though, and well written!
Again, I love the view from both perspectives! Please update soon. Oh, and don't get discouraged that some readers will be upset that Snape is not cuddly or nice, you have kept him true to Canon, and we are supposed to be reviewing the writing and the storyline, not criticising you for portraying Snape exactly how JK wrote him! I'm waiting with baited breath for the next update! :) Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again! You really are a faithful reviewer! Yes, Snape is definitely not nice, I am glad you think I've kept him true to Canon, that's what I wanted!
You definitely deserve five frogs for this chappie! Nice work! Author's Response: Thanks! Yes a story with CP is probably bound to provoke heated controversy... Well, and I write from Snape's point of view, how I think he would feel. That does not mean I agree with him.
Thanks for updating!! I was totally waiting for one from you!!
I can't believe that Dumbledore would agree to it's use for anything other than something really serious or dangerous. Fantastic chapter as usual. can't wait for the next one. I hope that Snape has a little mercy on Harry! I don't think the poor kid can handle anymore wacks from the cane. :O
He has had soo many chances to redeem himself with harry and what has he done? NOTHING!! The git! I can not believe dumbleD is letting Snape cane harry AGAIN, i mean the first time it was serious, but this time its just stupid, i mean, what student doesnt do what harry did? Everyone does it! Its not worth a caning, i just hope he doesnt break the kid, Author's Response: "i mean, what student doesnt do what harry did?" - Exactly. But will Snape see it like that? Nit likely, IMO. Thanks for reviewing!
Once again, DD did not ask eithr Severus or HArry what Draco was doing while Harry cursed him. He wasn't just producing flowers or stars from the end of his wand. But of course, DD and Snape both know what a little darling Draco is...never done anything wrong in his whole Hogwart's career. HE has always been the bullied, not the bully. Frustration rearing its ugly head again. Sorry to rant. I just don't like injustice. And Draco getting away scot free isn't fair. Especially considering the fact that both Snape and DD know that Draco is up to something sinister within the school. Something I have never thought of before. You would think Madam Pomfrey would have to remove Draco's upper clothing to check his wounds. You would think that she would have had to see the Dark Mark on his arm. And if this follows canon to this extent, Severus know Draco is a DE anyway, so he knows he would have been using the darkest curse he could think of against Harry. Still ranting...sorry. Author's Response: I never thought of Madam Pomfrey seeing the Dark Mark either, but you're right. Makes me wonder why even in canon Draco didn't protest when he was taken to the hospital wing.... Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me!
Author's Response: You'll find out soon...
Well you know what to do! UpDAtE !!!! :D Author's Response: Yes, I wouldn't want to be in Harry's shoes either, that's for sure...
poor kid Author's Response: *... but I think any teenage boy would totally avoid it!!* I absolutely agree, especially with someone like Snape! |
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