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Title: Dinner 07 Oct 2008 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this chapter better than the previous one, not that the other one was not well written, but ouch!

    I was a little disappointed in Snape for telling Malfoy the details of Harry's punishment. He should not have discussed the punishment with another student, even if Malfoy was the one who was hurt by Harry's actions. Now, the whole school will know about it.

    I hope that Snape will not be as harsh with Harry in the future, if you plan on there being a mentor/guardian type of relationship with Harry.

    Well written though!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your feedback.

    Yes, I understand what you mean, if I were Harry, I would just hate to think that Malfoy of all people knew I had been CANED. However, as it was Snape's main argument that Draco needed to know that Harry would be punished, it wouldn't have made much sense to cane Harry and then keep it quiet.

    As to how harsh Snape will be with Harry in the future, well, I will not tell you in advance...

Title: Dinner 06 Oct 2008 6:24 am
Reviewer: Dismal Air (Signed) [Report This]
    I forget what happened in cannon, maybe things were heating up too much event-wise for there to be any consequence for Harry? Anyway, I like how it's developing extremely slow--Snape is still rigid as ever and Harry is distant.

    Though you're killing me with these interludes lol, I'm ready for more :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad to hear you're ready for more, more will come!
Title: Punishment 05 Oct 2008 4:51 am
Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OUCH, that was harsh,...cane!? poor kid, I'm glad you wrote this realistically, because, we all know Harry would not start sobbing with the first hit, it worked out quite well, even snape's sympathy did not seem out of place.
    Great work

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I am glad you liked it. Yes, I tried to write this realistically, though luckily I do not have any first-hand experience.
Title: Punishment 04 Oct 2008 12:48 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouch, 10 strokes! I cant take more than 8, least Harry got to keep his bum covered. Still a good fic though, well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. It sounds as though you have experienced a caning yourself, you have my sympathies! Luckily I never have but I have heard it hurts A LOT!
Title: Dealing with The Chosen One 02 Oct 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Dang, this is good. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you like it. As the first chapters are already written, posting should happen frequently, after that it will take longer. But I promise to complete the story.

Title: Dealing with The Chosen One 01 Oct 2008 9:30 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Enjoyed the beginning. Liked the reactions of all to what Harry did to Draco. Looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Happy to read you like the beginning and hope you will like the rest, too!
Title: Dealing with The Chosen One 01 Oct 2008 4:32 pm
Reviewer: alenka38 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I Love your story!!!
    and I was pleased to know that you posted it here.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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