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Reviews For Sectumsempra - Snape's Perspective
I was a little disappointed in Snape for telling Malfoy the details of Harry's punishment. He should not have discussed the punishment with another student, even if Malfoy was the one who was hurt by Harry's actions. Now, the whole school will know about it. I hope that Snape will not be as harsh with Harry in the future, if you plan on there being a mentor/guardian type of relationship with Harry. Well written though! Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. Yes, I understand what you mean, if I were Harry, I would just hate to think that Malfoy of all people knew I had been CANED. However, as it was Snape's main argument that Draco needed to know that Harry would be punished, it wouldn't have made much sense to cane Harry and then keep it quiet. As to how harsh Snape will be with Harry in the future, well, I will not tell you in advance...
Though you're killing me with these interludes lol, I'm ready for more :) Author's Response: Thanks, glad to hear you're ready for more, more will come!
Great work Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I am glad you liked it. Yes, I tried to write this realistically, though luckily I do not have any first-hand experience.
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. It sounds as though you have experienced a caning yourself, you have my sympathies! Luckily I never have but I have heard it hurts A LOT!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. As the first chapters are already written, posting should happen frequently, after that it will take longer. But I promise to complete the story.
Author's Response: Happy to read you like the beginning and hope you will like the rest, too!
and I was pleased to know that you posted it here. Author's Response: Thank you! |
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