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Title: Temper Control 25 Feb 2022 1:26 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I was initially thinking veritaserum too! It was nice seeing Harry calm down from his own perspective.
Title: Temper Control 03 Jan 2009 7:01 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What an enjoyable story! I really like your having both sides/stories running concurrently.
    One thing you might look at: 32 lines up from the bottom, the sentence beginning "Determined to show Snape he could do it..." should end a little differently. The word "not" should be deleted, so it reads "...Harry closed his eyes in order to ward off all distractions."
    Otherwise, he doesn't want to ward off the distractions, and logically, that's the opposite of what I think you're after.
    Just a slip, I'm sure.

    Keep on having Snape and Harry learning to appreciate the other's perspective (as best as they can!)--and Happy New Year!
    May 2009 be a good year for all of us!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! And thanks for pointing out the mistake - I fixed it!
Title: Temper Control 01 Jan 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! I read the first couple chapters on fanfiction and I was happy to see that you continued it on this website as well. I love that everyone is in character and that you can make Snape somewhat civil without making him OOC. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I really hope I'll make it to the end without making anybody OOC....
Title: Temper Control 01 Jan 2009 12:40 pm
Reviewer: Bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry i havent updated before now...

    I like this story and think that its definately well written. I also like how you write it from both views, I cant wait to see what Snape was thinking when he agreed to heal Harry even after being disrespectful. I cant imagine why he would do that, without even so much as telling him off, but yes, I guess I will find out soon enough...

    Keep updating. This is a good story :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review, glad you liked it. It's good to read that you are curious about Snape's view, and yes, I'll update the other story tonight!
Title: Temper Control 31 Dec 2008 4:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! I don't know if "I" would be able to keep that bracelet green either!

    Great as usual! I'm curious to see it from Snape's perspective.

    Author's Response:

    Well, mine definitely wouldn't stay green, not with Snape in the same room...

    Thanks for your feedback!


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