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Reviews For Sectumsempra - The Consequences
I believe Harry has grown further in character by getting the courage to confront Snape and apologize. He did a good job in explaining himself and proving his remorse. I'm glad his professor now understands why Harry behaved the way he did and that they now have a better relationship, though not ideal. The ending of this chapter was funny, I enjoyed the slight jabs they made. Looking forward to reading the epilogue! :D Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, I suppose they managedto establish an acceptable relationship between them, as good as it could get, I think. And yes, I agree, Harry really has been brave. As I already wrote, it will take a while until I can post the epilogue, but before there is still the upate on Snape's perspective you can read ;)
NO, no, no, no, you can NOT do this to me! This was such a good put-together peice of work! Is this the last we'll hear from you? I hope not! Please keep coming out with work! I really really love it and I loved this chapter! It was great! It really was!! Especially the end, i had no doubt in my mind that you would have snape cane him as you have done so in the past! Therefore, Harry wasn't the only one thankful that you let him off~! (if you know what I mean!) lol Keep writing! Author's Response: Yes, I know what you mean! I am so glad that you liked this story! Thanks for your feed-back!
Im glad Snape said that the caning was a mistake (i agree, it was only ever for HIS benefit anyway)and that Harry got a chance to explain himself. I really hope you update again soon ! Oh and can I just ask (since you make a habit of replying, which is cool) will you ever write another story? Because I REALLY think you should! Ive never before (and im being perfectly honest here) read a story on here where the characters are as "in character" as you manage to write them. Its very cool! I bet you could come up with another story just as good ... Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I have to say I felt very flattered by your words! About updating soon, well, I suppose I have to repeat myself and say it will take a while until the epilogue will be posted, I am not sure about it yet and I don't want to mess the story up with a bad epilogue (then better none at all, I think!). But there is still this chapter from Snape's perspective you can look forward to ;) Will I ever write another story? Maybe, I am not sure yet. Real life doen't leave me a lot of time, but on the other hand, it has been fun... Sorry I cannot give you a more definite answer at this point!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I was so happy to read you enjoyed the story, and especially that you found no dull moments, thank you so much! |
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