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Reviews For Sectumsempra - The Consequences
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intense though! Poor Harry first this and then he's going to have to go and face Hermione! He certainly cannot tell he just got caned, oh but i really like your story because it is cannon Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a feedback, I am glad you liked it! The story will not be completely canon until the end, but it will stay pretty close, at least that's my intention...
My other theory was that he wasn't really afraid of the punishment because he is used to it from the Dursleys, but you didn't indicate anything in that direction either so I don't know. For Snape, well I hope he understood something by handing out such a severe punishment - namely that it's not as easy as he thought to be in possession of so much power and that he has a great deal more mercy and caring in him than he himself might have thought. That at least I think you have planned to show. So now I'm looking forward to the rest of this story and hope the comfort part will come as well... Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such a detailed feedback! Sorry to read you're disappointed about Harry's motivation, you definitely had some very intersting theories! Thanks for sharing them with me! In fact I really think it would be expecting a bit much from Harry - in this situation, I mean he is deeply shocked! - to even think so far as that he might make amends to Snape for the misdeeds of his father by choosing him. As for being used to that sort of punishment from the Dursleys, well not in this fic. I know it is generally agreed in fanfic that they abused him physically, but as in the books there is no mention of them hitting him, I don't assume they did.
Well written though. I hope that Snape lightens up a bit eventually though. Well done. Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it, even if I didn't answer sooner. Whether Snape willl lighten up, well, I won't say anything here.... |
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