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Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 03 Jan 2024 1:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so good! Erin is a terrific character. I love the rich picture you’ve painted of the background for the story.
Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 28 Jun 2012 6:16 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Erin. She is an interesting character. At least Harry will have someone in the neighborhood sympathetic to his plight.
Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 07 Nov 2008 5:16 pm
Reviewer: sandfull_a (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Still like it. Thank you. May I propose a little bit of action? And Erin is still the most alive character I think - that's remarkable for OC!

    Author's Response:

    Not sure what you mean by a little bit of action. Sorry if it's not moving fast enough for you. And as I am now working on chapter 27, there is not a lot i can do about changing things.

    Hope you can tolerate it as is.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 30 Oct 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    Speaking as someone with a lot of allergies, including ones to all petroleum products, scents, and sulfur, his allergy excuse isn't that bad. An allergy to petroleum would eliminate nearly all medicinal gels and creams as well as ordinary lotions, sunscreens, and bug sprays. Also, my cousin is allergic to aloe vera. Because of the nature of our immune systems, people can have an allergy to anything, even mild, gentle, natural things.

    Author's Response:

    I do realise that people can be allergic to anything at all, even gentle, natural things. But Harry was thinking on the spot, and Erin isn't a medical person, so she just assumes, as would many, that because it is a natural product, it should be OK. She did tell him just to try a tiny bit first.

    Thank you for your review.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 11 Oct 2008 4:12 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woah! Great start—though I doubt your miserable, tortured, brave Harry thinks so. :o That poor baby.

    I was a little sorry to see that this will be so Snape centric, just because I love Harry so much, but that's not your fault! Lol. Anyway, I was on tenterhooks after the end of this chapter, so I hunted down your fic on a different site and read it all there. *looks penitent* Sorry! You're to blame, you know—you write too exciting of stories. However, I'm going to try to keep reviewing here chapter by chapter—I hate reviewing on FFNET, and I can do more details on each chapter.

    I should warn you, though—in two weeks, I will be leaving to study abroad for a month, and I will not have time to read fan fiction. Also, as I get ready for my trip, I may or may not have time to read/review. So if I'm not reviewing, it's not because I'm bored with your story!

    I like Erin. And PUMPKIN! :D Awwww!!! As an emphatic cat lover, I am so happy to see one featured in a favorable light. Love kitties! Love, love, love. *gazes adoringly at her own lovely black cat*

    In case it wasn't clear, I'm another new reader. :D And I'm glad you've posted here, because I might never have known about this great story.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely words. That's dedication for you. You actually went and read it on ff.net.

    So you do know now that the story is very HArry-centric too. The romance is a big thing, but for this site, I didn't want to put too much emphasis on that as this is a Sev/HArry site. Glad you loved Pumpkin. She is modelled on my own fluffy black cat with a true bottle-brush tail. Merlin is gorgeous and has so much personality. He thinks he's human.

    Just read and review when you can. I hope your study trip is successful for you. Where are you going?

    Oh, yeah, by the way...I too love HArry.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 10 Oct 2008 9:22 pm
Reviewer: Lady Rosewolf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start.... pls update soon
Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 10 Oct 2008 7:13 pm
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful start, will be interesting to see how it flows. Thanks for sharing
Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 10 Oct 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY. Thanks for uploading here, Les! One of my favorite stories. I hope you'll get lots of most deserved reviews. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Tab. Number 4 review from people who already know the story.

    But thanks for the welcome.

    ~Les~

Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 10 Oct 2008 2:20 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I see you finally decided to post SSatM here :) I hope people here will like it as much as your ffnet readers! Mila

    Author's Response:

    It's not looking good, Mila. So far all of the reviews are from people who already know the story and have read it on ffnet.

    We'll see though.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. 10 Oct 2008 1:20 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! Guess I'll join Dawn in the squeeefest that you are over here now! Awesome!!!

    Everyone, read this story, it is absolutely brilliant!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Two votes for. I wonder if I will get any reviews from people who are not already fans of the story.

    Glad you are pleased Muggle is now on P&S.

     

    ~LesleY~


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