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Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 03 Jan 2024 1:59 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was awesome. I loved seeing a neighbor deflate Petunia and her beach ball offspring. I only hope Harry doesn’t pay for it afterwards.
Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 28 Jun 2012 6:18 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Erin put her foot into it now. Poor Harry will probably have to pay for her comments. At least he got a meal first.
Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 13 Nov 2008 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I found this story today and am enjoying it very much so far.

    Thank You
Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 07 Nov 2008 7:28 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    So far, I think this is the best work of yours I've read. Your plotting is interesting, Erin seems like a real person, and you've captured Harry and the Dursleys very well.
Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 02 Nov 2008 11:43 am
Reviewer: mangoyummy@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're really a very talented writer. :) You have a way with words.... the only improvements I would suggest would be the choppiness in your writing when you describe people's physical appearances. But your description of feelings etc. is very nice. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. I will have to check some of my descriptions and try to se how they differ from the rest of my writing, but thank you for pointing out what you consider to be a fault. Even if I can figure out what you mean, I might not be able to improve because I already put my all into my writing.

    Anyway, hope it doesn't deter you from reading more.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 31 Oct 2008 5:05 pm
Reviewer: sandfull_a (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am reviewing to let you know how much I am enjoing the story - as I'm sure lots of other people do! Thank you for such a promising idea and most of all for the trully brilliant writting style and characters! They are all so believable - I cant't wait to read more. Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for letting me know you are enjoying the story. I am glad you like my writing style and I hope I can keep you interested with future chapters.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 30 Oct 2008 8:38 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    When's Sev gonna show up?

    Author's Response:

    Next chapter.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 30 Oct 2008 6:51 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!!
    Waitt....is Erin Harry's love intrest...?
    but you really should up date a shocking discovery first!!!

    Author's Response:

    No, Erin is not Harry's love interest. She is twenty-eight years old. He has a bit of a crush on her, but that is quite common for young, hormone driven teens. And Erin is not into 16 year olds in that way. She has become incredibly fond of HArry. but not in a romantic sense. Read the story notes to find out the general outline.

    Thank you for your review and ASD will be updated ASAP.

    Another few chapters of this will be uploaded first though, because they are already written. I have 26 chapters of this written.

    Lesley

     

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 30 Oct 2008 4:28 am
Reviewer: celticmoon (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story! Looking forward to more (and more for A Shocking Discovery as well). The characters come alive in your stories. Well done!!!! Thanks so much for creating such a pleasureable reading experience.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for this lovely review. I am so glad that you like my writing and my stories.

    I will be updating this first because I have 26 chapters already written. I am working on the next chapter of ASD now.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion 30 Oct 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: paintbrush13 (Signed) [Report This]
    hey this was good, i would really like to read more, so keep going, its hard sometimes, as a writer on fanfiction.net i know that, but this story has great potential. update quickly please!
    HR

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you found the story and am enjoying it. Blatant plug, I know, but you might like my other story, 'A Shocking Discovery'. Both stories are also over at fanfic.net.

    Lesley


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