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Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 03 Jan 2024 5:05 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love her names for everyone! Albus calling a 28-year-old attractive is so skeevy :(
Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 14 Jan 2009 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Asterix Tutnix (Signed) [Report This]
    The Wicked WItch of the West, Gepetto and the Black Prince! This is such a good idea, loved it!
Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 07 Nov 2008 8:35 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay. You have REALLY pulled me into this story! I am really loving what you're doing here. Keep on keepin' on!

    Author's Response:

    So, you like this better than A Shocking Discovery, do you. Interesting. I have a few people who have said that, but most, I think, prefer ASD. Certainly by the number of hits and reviews on fanfic ASD comes out way in front.

    Hope you keep reading both stories, and thanks for the reviews.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 05 Nov 2008 8:29 am
Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pumpkin survived too, right? (Pleads on bended knee for you not to have killed off the poor sweet kitty-cat)
    Same for Hedwig?

    Author's Response:

    Hmm, always amazes me how people care more for the animals than they do the people. I will not say yay or nay, here, but keep reading. Won't be long until you know Pumpkin and Hedwig's fate. Oh, by the way, I love animals too.

    Thank you for your review.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 01 Nov 2008 7:32 pm
Reviewer: sandfull_a (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Still enjoying. And to say the truth I enjoy it even more reading long chapters. But you may have a point saying that long chapters are a little bit intimidating for some people (not for me, definitely!). So if you think its necessary, feel free to shorten the chapters a little - just not much, because if long chapters MAY be intimidating for some confused readers, very short ones are just irritating (smiles)!
    My congratulations on writing a believable "Muggle in Hogwarts" scene - its a rarity in our world.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you sandfull_a, for still reading and your review. I am like you, I love reading the long chapter too, particularly with the WIPs because you never know when you will get an update. To tell the truth I was thinking of cutting the chaters down a bit, but I wouldn't be comfortable with anything much under 4,500 words and I rarely have a chapter long enough to cut in half. So I will probably leave it as is. At least you like it!

    Probably not enough Harry and Snape interaction in this one either...the chapter where there was got the most reviews. Plus, people do not like OCs.

    Thanks for the kind words. I tried really hard to make Erin's reaction believable. Can you just imagine waking up there and seeing the things she is seeing...you would keep thinking it had to be a bad dream.

    Cheers,

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 01 Nov 2008 4:29 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story... I'm glad you're more reliable with updating than most people- I have the patience of a two year old, which is to say, not much if any at all... I literally can't wait until the next update. :)

    Author's Response:

    Umm, well, I will be able to keep you satisfied for the next several weeks anyway, because I have 26 chapters of this already written and will update frequently. After that, well, I am afraid as I write two stories updates of each are usually about every two weeks. I write quite long chapters and I cannot sit at the computer 24/7.

    I hope that does not turn you off when I revert to kind.

    Thank you for your review.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 5: Flight from Reality? 01 Nov 2008 1:52 pm
Reviewer: TangledPencils (Signed) [Report This]
    I just found your story, and I'm enjoying it. Please keep writing and continue soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I'm glad you found the story and very glad you are enjoying it.

    I'll upload a new chapter tomorrow. I have twenty-six written so updated will be rapid for a while.

    Lesley


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