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Title: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 05 Jan 2024 12:17 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Erin’s spirit. What a great character. I like the sizzling sparks of animosity flying between the two!
Title: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 25 Nov 2008 6:48 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I can hardly wait till you update! I've been really enjoying this story. I like its premise, and I like Erin's spirit. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much.. Am very glad you are enjoying 'Muggle', and the Muggle specifically. Couldn't have a weepy female falling for Sev! He'd sweep the floor with her and wouldn't be attracted to her in the first place.

    Update soon, I promise.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 24 Nov 2008 4:49 pm
Reviewer: lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just started reading your story and I like it a lot. I like the fact that Erin doesnt back down from Severus and that she is kind to Harry. I have to admit I hate the abuse part though. I cried when I read how badly Vernon beat Harry. Poor kid. He needs a nice mum and dad (hint to you!)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review, lily. Glad you found the story, and am thrilled you are enjoying it. Yep, Erin wouldn't take Sev's guff lying down...she is a thoroughly liberated woman.

    And Vernon is certainly a horror...not as bad in canon of course...we do attribute much more abuse to the Dursleys than they actually dole out in the books. Still horrible people though.

    Hope to hear from you again

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 19 Nov 2008 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Another absolutely terrific chapter!!

    The tension and chemistry you are building is very well done. Am I correct in assuming that it was Severus' hand comforting Erin?

    Author's Response:

    Umm, no sorry. Not Severus' hand. Severus was sitting on the opposite side of the table to Erin. it was Minerva's hand, and Erin even assumes it was Minerva, thinking to herself that Minerva seems to have taken it upon herself to be her  official comforter.

    No, Sev is reluctant to touch Erin to date, because he is worried about the electric shock he might get because he is attracted to her.

    Thanks for another great review. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 9: The Odious Task. 19 Nov 2008 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I sense a relationship brewing :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, it is a love story...so yes, their relationship is becoming even more tense.

    Thank you for your review.

    Lesley


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