Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 18 09 Jan 2024 2:36 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Erin doesn’t abandon Severus once she discovers the truth of his past.
Title: Chapter 18 05 Dec 2008 9:40 am
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i dont like the way you are portraying harry in this he seems much too much like draco, harry's greatest quality is that he does not become bitter because he has the power to LOVE

    Author's Response:

    I don't think I have ever been so insulted in my life! Comparing Harry With draco...purlease! I loathe Draco Malfoy.

    I don't ever recall Harry trying to hex someone when his back was turned, or try to get a teacher sacked by making a minor injury into a major one and milking sympathy for all it was worth, or trying to have na innocent creature killed because of he knew how much it would upset someone else.

    Harry is angry, here, yes. He says some sill things. But he also recants some of those things. He is concerned that DD looks so weary and that he is causing him more problems. And he is serious in his desire to leave the wizarding world because he does not want to see his friends hurt. Draco would think of himself before he would think of any of his friends.

    So, though I am sorry you do not like Harry in this story, I have to disagree strongly that he is acting like Draco. It is precisely because Harry can love that he is going to leave his friends...to protect them.

    Harry is a sixteen year old boy who has not exactly had a stellar life up to now; he is angry and I think his anger is justified. Most teenagers get angry for no reason...I should know, I have had five of them! HArry has plenty of reason and one of the main things that makes Harry different to Draco, is that he is always sorry for hte pain he causes.

    End of rant. By now, I hope you have read more and that Harry may have been vindicated in your eyes somewhat.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 18 05 Dec 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    I have been told that I made a mistake with the Frogs and I hope it was not on this fic or any fic for that matter.
    I love this fic, it's well pucker. And I'm amazed that you can write so fast.

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry about the mistake. But I wonder if you realise that the rating is up to ten. And that equates to the five frogs that show up next to the chapter. IE: if you want to give a story four frogs, you would rate it at eight. Don't ask me why...stupid system.

    Glad you like the fic though. And I am sorry to say, I can't write as fast as you are imaging I can write. I have written up to chapter 28 of this story. But I did not start posting here until quite recently. Therefore I had a big backlog of chapters to put up.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 18 05 Dec 2008 4:01 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    I have been told that I made a mistake with the Frogs and I hope it was not on this fic or any fic for that matter.
    I love this fic, it's well pucker. And I'm amazed that you can write so fast.

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