That last line made me smile!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 12 Dec 2008 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Just re-read the last 10 chapters up to here, which was where I managed to pause first time through - couldn't stop reading! As I'm determined to save the next big chunk to read over the Christmas break I thought it was only fair to leave a few lines to congratulate you on some great chapters.I like all the detailed descriptions you put in, and it seemed that Erin and Severus were acknowledging their attraction quite slowly, although the timescale was only a couple of days.It's also good to find a story where someone gives as good as they get in relation to S. and it makes a change that Harry, while a main character and hopefully continuing as such, is not the central focus of everything. Oh, and I love the idea of Dumbledore in lime green parrot print robes! Thank you.
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