Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 23 11 Jan 2024 1:49 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The sleeping arrangements were funny and mortifying for poor Aidan.
Title: Chapter 23 06 Dec 2008 8:37 am
Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Is it Vernon??? Someone's raping Harry, I got that much out of it....

    Author's Response:

    Is someone raping Harry? Vernon dursley is still recuperating from the injuries he received in the car accident that killed his wife and son. And how would Vernon know where HArry was when the Dark Lord doesn't?

    I think you need to wait for the next chapter.

    Thank you for your review

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What an utterly cruel cliffhanger!!!!
    But for the rest: Thank you for the many, many new chapters all of which I liked greatly! The story is quite unique and your developement of the original character Erin is very nice and convincing! Also the interaction between the different characters is very well developed! Your Snape is in character and so is Harry, and I like the way you are making the changes in their mutual relationship believable by going slowly and certainly not straight but with ups and downs!
    Now I hope that your next update will be soon, because I was really enjoying the read and now I want to know what the hell's been happening to poor Harry again, though I have my suspicions... (the "big burly muggle with the beer gut"?!).
    Thanxs for sharing this incredible story with us!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely compliments. I am so glad that you have enjoyed the sotry and the characters so far. I hope you continue to do so.

    Sorry for the cliffie. Won't be too long before the next update.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    OH MY GOD! This is an absolutely amazing story. I love how you are keeping Severus IC, but still allowing him a rational development of feeling toward Harry.

    This last chapter has been my favorite yet, what an amazing cliffie! Please update soon.

    Donna

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Donna for another lovely review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 6:28 pm
Reviewer: Coconut Rum (Signed) [Report This]
    My goodness woman, your fingers must be cramping over your keyboard you're giving so many lovely chapters at one time. I began this story a couple of weeks ago...only because you're the author and I love A Shocking Discovery so much. Both this and "Discovery" are among the best of the best father/guardian/mentor fics, and stand head and shoulders over many of what are generally considered the "best of the best." Thank you for such well-written, well-plotted stories and regular updates. And, thank you for the recent multiple chapters of this fic -- what a pleasant surprise, like Christmas come early. Nevertheless, you are a wicked woman for leaving us with this cliff hanger!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Coconut Rum for your very kind words. I am honoured that you rate me up ther with the best of the best. Very heartening words, I must say, because sometimes I really doubt my own ability, especially when there is not very much feedback.

    I do have to tell you though, that as much as I wish I could write as quickly as you credit me with being able to do, I cannot! The story is written up to chapter 28, so, once I upload up to there, updates will be much slower.

    Sorry for the cliffie, but you won't have a terribly long wait.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 11:53 am
Reviewer: ashmeadowphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh no! what a cliffy to stop on. However great chapters. please update soon

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. Sorry to distress you with the cliffie. Patience is the key!

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 10:52 am
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    definately think adrian just got raped...if it is, i hope you'd just add the warning...who could it be? Vernon Dursly maybe? maybe he didnt pass away..
    update soon

    Author's Response:

    I think you mean Aidan. And I didn't put up a warning for a very good reason. Sorry if the lack of a warning upset you, but even if a rape occurred (and I am not saying it did) I would certainly not have written it.

    And Vernon didn't pass away...Petunia and dudley did. I did say that earlier. Vernon is recovering from his injuries at this time.

    Thank you for you review. Won't be long before the update is posted.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 23 05 Dec 2008 8:25 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa! I knew SOMETHING was going to happen at some point! So glad you've been updating so assiduously of late--I'll PM you to give you a more full reporting!
    Highly well done!

    Author's Response:

    Hi there! Thanks for another review. I have this story written up to chapter 28, so after that, things will slow down.

    Glad you are still enjoying it.

    Lesley


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