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Reviews For Severus Snape and the Muggle
Erin is an excellent OFC who doesn't descend into the irritation of Mary-Sueishness. I love how you have her standing up to Severus when he's at his worst, and while the actual number of days that they've known each other is rather short, I have known a real life couple who, due to the circumstances in which they met, snarled at each other horribly, yet, within two weeks, they'd realized that they were desperately attracted to each other. So I don't find the quickness of the development of Erin and Severus' relationship unrealistic. Poor Harry.... I find the string of nasty events happening around and to him rather canon, actually. It certainly seemed in the novels that anytime Harry had something good come into his life, he lost it before the end of the book--or, in the case of Ron's friendship, it was challenged by jealousy and anger for a significant amount of time before resolving and getting stronger. Gosh, I could go on and on about this. *grin* I have truly loved this story, and while it has been three years since it was last updated, I will continue to hope that you will return to it. I want to see Harry, Severus and Erin become a family (I did catch that bit where Erin almost admitted to herself that she wants to be Harry's mum!) even more than I want to see the end of Voldemort! When you decide to come back to this, please know that you've got a new dedicated reader who will be thrilled to see more of this story. Well done! (BTW, I'm a 50 year old mum of five kids, and I have to thank them for dragging me into the Potterverse back when HP and the Goblet of Fire came out. So nice to see fic written by another mum!)
WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!? Author's Response: Oh dear! So sorry that you have had to resort to a plea. I am afraid that I stopped posting Muggle here because it generated so little interest. I am not talking reviews here, but overall readership. Also, it is a very painful process for me to upload chapters on this site because I have changed my internet provider to Mozilla Firefox and I have to copy and paste everything with them for some reason and it takes forever. I am afraid the readership is not worth the pain and effort. But if youa re still interested in the story, I still post over at fanfic.net. Lesley~
Lesley~
Author's Response: Hi, Donna. I'm afraid that your hope as far as Harry finding out about the boys is doomed. Of course he has to find out...this is Harry. He already suspects strongly that there is something going on. Thans for another review. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I just looked up your bio, as I usually do when a new person reviews, and I see that this is your first review. I am honoured. Glad you enjoyed this chapter, and I hope you have enjoyed the rest of the story as much. You will be surprised at how Harry finds out, because of course, he will. Seems like you like Harry and Ginny getting closer. I am glad...another reviewer I just responded to does not like them together. Hope to hear from you again. Lesley
Author's Response: Sorry you don't like Harry and Ginny because I love them. But together, they will not be a major feature of the story. Indications will show that they are becoming attracted to each other though, and I hope this will not be a major turn off for you. Glad that you like Sev/Erin though. Thank you for your review. Lesley
Author's Response: Thanks for another lovely review. Glad that you are still enjoying the story. Lesley |
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