| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 17 Jan 2016 8:36 am
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was brilliant! I love how Lucius is a spy and saved Harry and is angry at Dumbledore. And that Severus and Lucius was willing to do what they did to protect Harry. I love how Harry was angry that Lucius left himself and got him back. Than how Tonks is with Severus and both are so cute and Harry as well. Than Pompfrey! Oh what a wonderful plot twist! I definitely cannot wait for the next update. I wonder what Severus will call Harry next and will be wake up to being cuddled by Tonks or Severus? And Dobby! I love Dobby in here. I think you're a brilliant writer and author! Cheers and ta. I know my twin is going to love this like I do. I wish I could rate this higher than a 10.
Well, everything moves SO fast. Try slowing things down and delving into emotions a bit more, along with descriptions. That would make your writing amazing~!
I love the plot.
| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 15 Feb 2012 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow! I certainly didn't expect that! Poppy Pomfrey as a supporter of Voldemort was definitely a surprise!
I do hope that you will follow up with an update soon!
| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 02 Jul 2010 4:35 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Awesome! Very original too! I hope you post the next one sooner!
Definately didn't die of boordom! POPPY?!?!?!? I think that's a first for me! And how harry handled her! Wow.
More Please!
V.
| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 09 Sep 2009 5:59 pm
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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love it.....need more and soon. cookie and cake will be offered.
I had to go back to the first chapter & reread...not a bad thing in my books.....but i liked it. Hope to see more soon.
| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 01 Sep 2009 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: llpi (Anonymous)
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Superpower Harry is fun and I like SnaDora. How does good!Lucius account for planting the diary on Ginny and trying to get DD removed in Chamber of Secrets? Do you have a plan for where you are going with this story? I just read it through for the first time, but I won't be interested if it's going to be months and months between each chapter.
Poppy evil? well shit.
Harry draining her magic serves her right.
| Title: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power
| 31 Aug 2009 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: nightcrawlerfw (Anonymous)
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yeay, an update. don't make me wait so long for another one, ok :) I now have to rush off to a class. Great chapter, that was unexpected (pomphry).
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