This is very good, I feel bad for harry and can't wait to see what Lucius will do. It should be interesting, since in my fics he's usually one of awful bad guys!
well its a good start and i would like to read more of this fic as one chapter isn't enough to decide whether its a good fic or not, i thought snape was in character
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Nothing like a dramatic start! lol. I don't like nice Malfoy's in general, but if the rest of it's good I'll definitely be willing to make an exception. I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses—it has, potentially, a lot of...potential. Haha.
So far your Snape seems Snapey!
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Very nice start! You just had to leave us hanging, didn't you!
Please update soon. I hope that Harry will be ok. I'm curious, also to see how the relationship develops
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 12:37 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Interesting beginning. I didn't think the torture was too graphic at all. And you left off in a good place so that I would like to find out what happens next. The parts in italics was hard to read because it is squished together so much. So far, Severus' characterization seems pretty good. I will look forward to more. Thank you for posting.
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