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Reviews For O What Tangled Webs
That's very different! I like it! I also like how Severus comforts Harry and agrees to look after him. aww! Can't wait for the talk between him and Lucius!
Dora and Sev? Interesting couple! So, is Harry Snape's son then, or does he just adopt Harry? I didn't really read the description too well, I guess! Please update soon, I am anxious to see them become a family! Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm so glad you liked it. And yes, Harry is Snape's son, but they won't find out till latr, like next chapter or the one after. I'll try to update sooner. I really will. And for some reason, I just think Sev and Dora are the CUTEST!! lol
Nice, can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope that they all get out alive!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!!! I'm so glad yo liked it.
Author's Response: :D Nothing!
Harry and Sev are of course perfectly placed.
Don't worry about the chapter being "short". There's no minimum or maximum word count or length requirement (you're not doing a potions essay for Professor Snape, after all) so long as the chapter tells the reader what you want it to. Are you writing this "as you go" or do you have an outline of what you want to have happen? You may not need a co-author but a good beta who is willing to work with you to get the words to say what you want them to say. A good beta doesn't just proofread for spelling, grammar and punctutation but makes suggestions regarding POV, characterization ("Are you really, sure that so-and-so would react like X in Y situation?" "Why is canon-character A acting like this? It's not typical behaviour for the character, so there's got to be an underlying reason.") and can help you clarify things to yourself about your story. And a good beta reader always knows that their suggestions are just that, suggestions. There are a large number of good betas that frequent this site. You might want to contact one of them if you want some reassurance and a second opinion on your chapters before you post them. If you want to "talk" to me about beta-ing for you, just reply back and we can make arrangements. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comments I really appreciate it. And yes I am writing this as I go, but I lso have an idea of what I want to happen. I meant to get bck to you erlier when I read about the offer to beta, but I kept forgetting. And, too, I was enjoyig the freedom to post when I please, or at least when I had a chapter done, and not waiting on someone else to proofread. I've a beta for my other story, and I'm afraid it just takes too long. I'm not even sure she's even seen my chapter, as she hasn't even emailed me back to say she's recieved it. *sigh* I suppose I could try you out. Let me know if you're still interested, k? |
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