| Title: Shattered
| 12 Oct 2008 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Not bad! I do think your Vernon is a little off...I think he has more of a sense of self preservation than that...but I'm looking forward to your update.
You really updated quickly. Nice Job. Great storyline, can't wait to see where you are going with this.
I'm anxiously waiting for the next update, which I hope will be as quick as this one!
| Title: Shattered
| 12 Oct 2008 6:21 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Well, things can only get better...
Oooh! That's exciting! I can hardly wait for more!!!
well its a good start and i would like to read more of this fic as one chapter isn't enough to decide whether its a good fic or not, i thought snape was in character
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 2:28 am
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Nothing like a dramatic start! lol. I don't like nice Malfoy's in general, but if the rest of it's good I'll definitely be willing to make an exception. I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses—it has, potentially, a lot of...potential. Haha.
So far your Snape seems Snapey!
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 2:24 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Very nice start! You just had to leave us hanging, didn't you!
Please update soon. I hope that Harry will be ok. I'm curious, also to see how the relationship develops
| Title: Never a Peaceful Night
| 12 Oct 2008 12:37 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Interesting beginning. I didn't think the torture was too graphic at all. And you left off in a good place so that I would like to find out what happens next. The parts in italics was hard to read because it is squished together so much. So far, Severus' characterization seems pretty good. I will look forward to more. Thank you for posting.
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