Fabulous. Simply fabulous ending. Bittersweet but just as wonderful. Thnak you for sharing.
I guess you just had a plot outline and followed it. You had such great emotion going, I feel bad telling you I'm disappointed you ended this already.
It was such a promising premise, I do hope that at some time you revisit it and rework this into a longer storyline. It's just too good to end so abruptly.
Author's Response: Okay. You are right. I will try and change it, make it longer. I'd like to know what happened in those six years anyhow. Thanks for reviewing
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