Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Disneyland Daddy 16 Oct 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. I don't usually love kidfics, but you are a good writer and I'll be interested to see where the story is going. I like the phrase, "the Snape man". LOL Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I "converted" you to young Harry! :o) I've always liked reading about him getting out from under the Dursleys, though I prefer Sirius over Snape. Thanks for your comments!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 16 Oct 2008 1:27 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT idea!! I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 16 Oct 2008 12:29 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story Severus is starting it off on the wrong foot from the beginning to irratate harry on purpose poor little guy.

    Author's Response: I think Snape did that a lot in canon - that is, bait Harry for the fun of it - and they're going to be at odds for a while, but they'll start getting along eventually. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 16 Oct 2008 12:26 am
Reviewer: Kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very nice story
    i absoultely love it and im not one for kidfics
    this is great
    you have a good voice through out!
    keep it up!
    and update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I never thought I could write Snape as Harry's guardian, but the muse doesn't really care about my preferences. I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 15 Oct 2008 10:11 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great begining,you write very well.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing; I appreciate the compliment!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 15 Oct 2008 10:11 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story, it has great potential, and I'm looking forward to reading more! I especially liked the way you introduced Sev, you captured him perfectly.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I think Snape usually gets portrayed as being a lot nicer than he really is. Even if they start getting along better in this story, I can't see him ever going fluffy on us.
Title: Disneyland Daddy 15 Oct 2008 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this, given the evidence of wit (the deaths of the Dursleys due to the weight limit), and especially, the characterization of Albus...very hard, and much more on the money than usual. So I am much looking forward to the rest.

    Author's Response: You know, I couldn't just have them die in a car crash; too boring. And Dumbledore is usually very calm in canon, but I keep remembering the scene in Snape's Pensieve where he called him "disgusting." Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Disneyland Daddy 15 Oct 2008 7:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I have the honour of being the first to review your story.

    Very nice beginning, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with the story. A seven year old Harry; can you just picture it! He must have been so cute at seven. I want to just cuddle him!

    Author's Response: My first review! I'm posting a story soon with a five-year-old Harry, but it can't go up here because it's Sirius, not Snape. He was so cuddly that I had to do a Snape one, too. I think Harry was sweet enough in the first movie, and Daniel had to be twelve, at least. Seven would be too cute for words. Thanks for reviewing!

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