Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Buckingham Palace 30 Oct 2009 7:38 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He has just exchanged one hell hole for another. Snape was foul.

    Subject matter notwithstanding, the chapter was very well written.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Whoever came up with the phrase "Be careful what you wish for" sure said a mouthful. And yet it won't always be this bad. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Buckingham Palace 27 Mar 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    i know you said that it will take awhile for things to get better. But i do hope Snape beings to care for harry in the end.

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure he will eventually; there's just a lot of James-hate to work through first. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 08 Jan 2009 3:58 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is very interesting so far! I know you haven't updated in a while, but if you ever decide to, I'd be interested in seeing what will happen :)

    Author's Response: Well, you won't have to wait any longer; reviewers kept nudging until I was forced to finish Chapter 3. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 14 Nov 2008 3:32 am
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter! I love how Severus takes Harry's ignorance of normal life as sarcasm. That's kind of odd because most seven year olds can't do sarcasm. I guess Snape isn't an expert on being a guardian to young children! I like how you had the Dursley's die though; very funny.

    Author's Response: I'll bet seven-year-old Snape did sarcasm! Or I could just see him pulling a Mikey as his mother tried to make baby food interesting. "Heh, heh. I'm still not eating it." But he's looking at Harry now and seeing James, who would probably make just such a comment. It'll be hard for both of them to adjust. Thanks for your comments!
Title: Buckingham Palace 14 Nov 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    More please? Pretty pretty please?

    (^_^)/
    BEM

    Author's Response:

    It's coming! Soon, I hope, if the pain meds take. :o) Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Buckingham Palace 26 Oct 2008 6:13 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This feels so promising ; ). I like your writing style and I really like this story!. I'm looking forward into next chappy!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I'm glad so many people like the story, and the next chapter will be up as soon as my wrists will cooperate.
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 10:33 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is so loveably unreasonable. It is so funny to read. You keep Harry nicely in character, I like it. Mila

    Author's Response: Even though Harry got shouted at all the time with the Dursleys, he seemed to have a little backchat left in him in canon. Beats me why. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 10:21 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Since I enjoyed Snape being nasty, I thoroughly enjoyed this. The misunderstandings of both parties are very skillfully done.

    Author's Response: He'll be nasty for a while, but I can't take it much longer. :o) Snape always seemed to misread Harry in canon, and it's even worse now that he's a guardian instead of a teacher. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I like how Harry tries to be brave, but deep down, he knows that there's something scary about Snape... The small details like Snape accidentally digging his fingernails into Harry's back when he picked him up were really well-done. It's obvious that Snape doesn't even know he's being so rough. He brushed the dirt off of Harry to keep him clean--rather parental--but did it a little too harshly. That seems to sum Snape up in a nutshell...at least for a mentoring!Snape that's written well.

    I'm anxious to see what you have planned for the rest of this story. I'm loving it. :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! We know how cute Harry must have been at seven, but Snape only sees his old enemy. I think he's protecting himself from being hurt again, as if Harry's going to hex him or humiliate him the way James did. I don't think he'd be so rough with Harry, but subconsciously he's really hurting James. He'll soften eventually, I hope. :o)

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