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Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 8:06 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. This is one of my favourite points in the relationship between Harry and Snape; where Harry gets misunderstood and Snape it grouchy towards him the whole time - it makes me angry when Snape starts behaving this unfairly to Harry (angry in a good way, 'cos it means I'm being drawn into the story!) but I enjoy it, and yours is well phrased. I liked how the handshake was compared to the square egg!

    Anyway, it was a very enjoyable read and I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: I get really upset when Snape misinterprets Harry in canon. I think that's why these stories are the most popular, because we can soften him up. Even I cringe at Snape's meanness here, and I wrote it! :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry! :(

    I really love your writing. Very nice start to the story. You have portrayed Snape so mean and snarkey. In other words, he's perfectly in character!

    I hope that Snape lightens up a bit as time goes on, or poor Harry will be worse off, in some ways, than with the Dursleys!

    Can't wait to read the next chapter--which I hope will be soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! Snape will soften a tiny bit over time, but right now, every time he looks at Harry, he sees James. You're right, though; Harry might as well be with the Dursleys. The devil you know is better than the devil you don't . . . but at least he gets a big bed. :o)
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Bluenose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape's misinterpretation of Harry has me bristling with indignation. Well done! Your Snape seems very much in character. Harry is engaging. I'm anxious as to what the morning will bring. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: That's how I usually felt in canon! Indignant. Snape just never listened. He'll probably continue on with this attitude for a while, but I hope they can work it out. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Buckingham Palace 23 Oct 2008 6:50 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter, i hope severus learns to accept harry and teaches harry good lessons for his life as it will be hard

    Author's Response: I think Snape could be a good parent if he'd let go of his baggage . . . which hopefully I can get him to do, at least eventually. Thanks for the review!

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