I really like this story, it has great potential, and I'm looking forward to reading more! I especially liked the way you introduced Sev, you captured him perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I think Snape usually gets portrayed as being a lot nicer than he really is. Even if they start getting along better in this story, I can't see him ever going fluffy on us.
| Title: Disneyland Daddy
| 15 Oct 2008 9:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed this, given the evidence of wit (the deaths of the Dursleys due to the weight limit), and especially, the characterization of Albus...very hard, and much more on the money than usual. So I am much looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: You know, I couldn't just have them die in a car crash; too boring. And Dumbledore is usually very calm in canon, but I keep remembering the scene in Snape's Pensieve where he called him "disgusting." Thanks for reviewing!
I have the honour of being the first to review your story.
Very nice beginning, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with the story. A seven year old Harry; can you just picture it! He must have been so cute at seven. I want to just cuddle him!
Author's Response: My first review! I'm posting a story soon with a five-year-old Harry, but it can't go up here because it's Sirius, not Snape. He was so cuddly that I had to do a Snape one, too. I think Harry was sweet enough in the first movie, and Daniel had to be twelve, at least. Seven would be too cute for words. Thanks for reviewing!
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