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Reviews For The Seven Year Snitch
Although I certainly hope you won't make us wait as long for the next one! Author's Response: I had some serious writer's block here, which I hope won't be the case in the future. Thanks for reviewing!
Does he not realize that there were TWO boys living in that house? If that was supposed to be Harry's bedroom (not) then where was Dudley's? Snape is SUPPOSED to be INTELLIGENT! Author's Response: Well, the bedroom Snape thought to be Harry's was Dudley's 'toy room', so it was a pretty logical conclusion (why would one boy have two bedrooms, after all?) I imagine Dudley was always getting clothes and presents that never got used, so Snape must have assumed the ones in the junk room were Harry's (too big, but bought with the idea that he'd grow into them). Growing up, I always had piles of clothes to "grow into" . . . five years later when they weren't remotely in style anymore. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Working on the next one now. ;o)
On the other hand he would definitely believe the broken toys, lies, and bad behavior the Dursleys told him about. However, it seemed like a disconnect for me since his mission was to find Harry's clothing and he came back with nothing. Were the clothes bought to cover the fact that Harry had none? I think I'm as confused as Harry now. Very good story though. I think I might wait until a little more is written to continue reading so that I don't have all these unanswered questions. Thanks! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Having grown up with more clothing to "grow into" than that which actually fit, I'm having Snape assume that the few brand-new clothes were for later, while the used clothing had been donated. And he did bring some back, I think; still trying to decide. Those questions, at least, should be answered next chapter. So I can find new, inventive ways to confuse! Mwahahaha!
You portray the characters very well though. Nicely done. Author's Response: Fanon Snape is pretty much a whole new character from his canon counterpart, that's for sure. :o) He'll never get fluffy, but it won't be this way forever. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for reviewing!
I have question: Will Snape find out about Harry's treatment at Dursleys? Author's Response: He will, it'll just take a while. After all, he had his suspicions, which have now been confirmed by Marge and bolstered by Noddy, so he has no reason to suspect anything's off about the whole affair. He'll never believe a word Harry says unless something happens. What will happen? Not telling. :o) But you know me; it'll come out of nowhere. Thanks for reviewing!
I wonder, what will be Severus thinking when he arrives at Dursley's house and when he finds out about the cupboard. It will be interesting... P.S.: Sorry if I wrote some mistakes, English isn't my native language. ;-) Author's Response: No, don't worry, I didn't give it up. :o) I've just been having a little trouble. Probably the next chapter will be Snape's POV, so we can see what happened at the Dursleys'. Thanks for reviewing!
I was reading this story today, and i found it rather fasinating. I love it all, though i do hope Snape realizes that Harry wasn't lying all this time and that that horrible little house elf is discovered....uhh,he makes me mad! Anyway, are you planning on continuing this story, or had you forgotten about it? I hope not, as i have loved it so far. Please write another chapter very soon. Thank you very much, Just Me. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I had some writer's block on Chapter Five, which I hope was a freak occurrence. I'll be writing more, if only because Snape won't cooperate and see the light. :o)
Author's Response: Unfortunately, Harry doesn't agree. :o(
i hope he gets a bit nice and strats acting a little more snapish even snape is not that daft.... but other than that it a great story Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, even though Snape's hideous face is marring the view at times. :o) Thanks for reviewing! |
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