*Gasp!* dun, dun, duuuunnnnn!!!
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| 31 Oct 2008 6:26 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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love this little story. Poor Harry Poor severus how would you like to find out you have a child you knew nothing about.
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| 28 Oct 2008 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Poor Harrry and Hermione. What a shock
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| 28 Oct 2008 10:20 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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And away you go! :) Look forward to your next posting.
Interesting chapter, with an interesting development! One minor typo needs correcting, tho: Padma's sister spells her name a little differently: it's PARVATI.
Good chapter, tho!
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| 28 Oct 2008 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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Wonderful! must have more...more...MORE
Oh wow!
I love this story, Snape making them clean up the popcorn the muggle way was too funny!
Oooh! What a revelation! I really like the relationship between Harry and Hermione as you have shown it. Actually, I never thought that Hermione and Ron could ever have a successful relationship. They are too different and each would try to change the other person to make them more like the other. It would be a match made in hell. But Harry and Hermione have a nicely balanced amount of similarities and differences. I think that their relationship would be successful.
I also liked the fact that you didn't give us a laundry list of description telling us exactly what Harry looked like when the glamour came down. You told us everything we need to know with those last few lines: "...looked like Lily Potter, more that I ever have..." and "I look like Snape's son." I got shivers just reading that.
I await your next chapter with bated breath.
Muahahahahahahah!!!! I so love this story. Please tel me you'll be updating soon. I'd very much like to continue reading!!
Don't just leave it there, keep it going, your working on the next chapter as i type aren't you??? I hope you are because this is not like other severitus'... and i mean that in a good way.
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