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Reviews For Encounter with a Snake
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not sure I have another, novel idea for the premise, but I'll keep thinking. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it - hope you like the others, too!
Love your short stories, you have me definitely hooked. :) Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear you like the shorts - they're a lot of fun to write. :)
The only problem I noticed was that a few times when Harry and the basilisk were speaking, the dialogue ended up in the same paragraph, you might want to go back and check it, so people don't get confused. Author's Response: Thanks! The formatting on this website is driving me nuts! I will go make repairs. I thought I got them all when I proofed the chapter but obviously not.
Author's Response: That tumbled out as a total throwaway line - no thought involved - but became one of my faves too! Author's Response: That tumbled out as a total throwaway line - no thought involved - but became one of my faves too!
Author's Response: I must admit to really liking this naughty, manipulative, and oh so cute Harry! It's great to hear that he's popular with others as well. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: LOL! I know what you mean - once the kids' safety is involved, no thought is involved. It's just GET TO THEM AND GET THEM SAFE! :) So glad you're enjoying the story!
And I recognize that bit of story Sev was reading, it's from Kipling's Just So Stories and I love them! Them and the Jungle Books. Now Harry's really in trouble! Author's Response: Yep, the Chamber sure has been opened. Here we go - just a few years early. And yes, the story is indeed "The Elephant Child" by Kipling. Great catch!
Author's Response: LOL! I'll update very soon. Glad you're enjoying the story! |
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