Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 07 Nov 2008 3:31 am
Reviewer: ahreada (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a fantastic series. Please continue.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not sure I have another, novel idea for the premise, but I'll keep thinking. :)
Title: Chapter 3 07 Nov 2008 2:19 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, this was adorable! I loved how you protrayed Harry and Severus with the basilisk. it was great. Now I'll have to look at the others in this series.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it - hope you like the others, too!
Title: Chapter 3 07 Nov 2008 2:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Harry is such a little cutie. Arguing with a Basilick...indeed! ;)

    Love your short stories, you have me definitely hooked. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear you like the shorts - they're a lot of fun to write. :)
Title: Chapter 3 07 Nov 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a very neat conversation harry had with the basilisk. It was funny to see him insulting it in a typical little kid fashion and getting it to accept Sev as his new Master. Well done!

    The only problem I noticed was that a few times when Harry and the basilisk were speaking, the dialogue ended up in the same paragraph, you might want to go back and check it, so people don't get confused.

    Author's Response: Thanks! The formatting on this website is driving me nuts! I will go make repairs. I thought I got them all when I proofed the chapter but obviously not.
Title: Chapter 3 06 Nov 2008 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I laughed like crazy at Sirius and the porn magazine, and the conversation between Harry and the Basilisk.

    Author's Response: That tumbled out as a total throwaway line - no thought involved - but became one of my faves too!

    Author's Response: That tumbled out as a total throwaway line - no thought involved - but became one of my faves too!
Title: Chapter 2 06 Nov 2008 4:33 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! Harry is so funny. I love 'im. Update soon!

    Author's Response: I must admit to really liking this naughty, manipulative, and oh so cute Harry! It's great to hear that he's popular with others as well. :)
Title: Chapter 2 06 Nov 2008 3:37 am
Reviewer: mmcgonall (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful. I'm so glad you're writing more on this series :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 06 Nov 2008 12:44 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOL That was a great ending. "he jumped through the opening." I can just see it, as a parental-type person. Doesn't matter what's there--you just gotta save your child. Your Snape is very amusing. I'm enjoying the story immensely. Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: LOL! I know what you mean - once the kids' safety is involved, no thought is involved. It's just GET TO THEM AND GET THEM SAFE! :) So glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 2 05 Nov 2008 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh, the chamber's been opened again, hasn't it??

    And I recognize that bit of story Sev was reading, it's from Kipling's Just So Stories and I love them! Them and the Jungle Books.

    Now Harry's really in trouble!

    Author's Response: Yep, the Chamber sure has been opened. Here we go - just a few years early. And yes, the story is indeed "The Elephant Child" by Kipling. Great catch!
Title: Chapter 2 05 Nov 2008 6:45 pm
Reviewer: Romado (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story i really need you to update I like how you have Snape and Black be godfathers together. And Minerva telling Albus no is great.

    Author's Response: LOL! I'll update very soon. Glad you're enjoying the story!

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