Poor Snape! He's such a good guy (sometimes) but no one else seems to get it! Wonderful chapter.
Oh that was so well written. Poor Snape struggling with the realities of being a father at sixteen!
Can't wait for next update.
i'm really enjoying this story although the magical pregnancy bit was a bit too far-fetched IMHO. in any case, i really love how Sev is stepping up to being a father even if it was thrust upon him. lily was really being unfair to him and rather selfish i think... i really hope they don't end up together... she doesn't deserve Sev... i also hope lily doesn't get custody of harry
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| 21 Dec 2008 5:03 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I loved, loved the opening to this chapter about Snape reading the potions text about Muggle-born Maude. LOL! You have him down so perfectly. But poor Snape, trying to be a 16 year old father. What a mess! The scene with Molly was so dramatic, but I am SO glad that he had someone to help rescue him. Poor Severus. He's really being badly used.
And Harry - he is described so nicely for being a baby. I especially loved the fire engine with black hair description. And then how he smiled when Lily came and Snape felt betrayed. Wow what a fine handle on emotions you weave.
Fantastic writing, fantastic chapter. thank you so much for sharing it.
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