Awesome chapter. I worry for Draco. Severus' pleading for his godson was delightful. The comma and quotation and other mistakes seem to be resolved in this chapter. Much, much, much better. I really, really like this story and am so glad of the opportunity to read it. Thank you so much for posting it!
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| 24 Mar 2009 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Liouba (Anonymous)
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Hi! hey, I just wanted to thank you for that fabulous story!!! I just love it, you write it just perfectly!!!!
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| 27 Jan 2009 6:40 am
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| Reviewer: kelsin79 (Anonymous)
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OMG!!! I absolutely love this story so far!! Please update soon. I check this website every day waiting for an update.
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| 21 Jan 2009 2:15 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I really liked this chapter and Harry's dinner with the dog treat was funny. I'm glad those two talked and resolved some issues. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Cute! What a naughty puppy! ;)
Hope they get closer and Harry will feel more secure.
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| 17 Jan 2009 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous)
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Nice chapter. Look forward to the next.
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| 17 Jan 2009 8:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Me! (Anonymous)
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OMG! I loved it!
It was a great chapter, and it seems Snape is getting quite attached to the child without even knowing it.
I LOVED the name for puppy Harry, Felan. At first I was like, please don't call him Wolfy or Fluffy or any fy-fy thing...that's so overused and I don't see Snape walking around calling "Wolfy?!", so Felan is just perfect. It does tells Harry he is small in every way, telling he IS a child weather he is 5 or 15, but it also sounds strong. I just like the name! ^_^
I think you are doing a great job between teen Harry and little Harry. I mean, durring the talk it was kind of his 15 year old self...though i do think a 15 year old would flush crimson admiting he was spanked for something, or unable to say the word...but i also loved how he seemed to suddenly become 5 with his little tantrum and all. Is he really affraid of the dark?
I'm really enjoying this story and i can't wait to see what Felan will do to Mrs. Norris, that aweful cat!
Also, will Harry be able to write the lines and the essay? I mean, his mind is the same, but his body is that of a five year old along with his skills, he might have trouble wiht the pen-feather thingy. Small children usually get frustrated when unable to do something, ending in tears or a major tantrum...(hint, hint!)
I do hope we get to see more of little Harry as well as Felan. And Snape is being such a great father already! I can't wait for the adoption and how will Harry take it! Oh, also, what will Minerva will be teaching him???
well, i better let you go and keep writing. Please update soon! I LOVE this story, the idea is quite unique and i love how this is going. Will be waiting!!
From Me to You!
Great story, it becomes better and better. I like the way you keep Snape in charakter, there are so many stories were Snape is badly OOC so nice and soft!!LOL Good work, thank you (and sorry for my bad english!)
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| 17 Jan 2009 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: maha q8 (Anonymous)
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this story is gonig to my fav i hope u update soon i love little harry i don't like him much as a wolf but as a small boy he is so cute
will snape take harry shopping ?? will harry like snape or see him as a father ?? wonder what will happen
thanks for all your work
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