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Reviews For Like My Father
Title: To the Infirmary 18 Jan 2009 12:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha, Pomfery caught him, lol. Hopefully Sev can learn to get along with Harry.

    -P.G.
Title: First Transformation 18 Jan 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, very interesting. I like what you've got so far. One suggestion would be to write out the word "okay" instead of abbreviating it as "o.k." Good story!

    -P.G.
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Look forward to the next.
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 8:51 pm
Reviewer: Me! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I loved it!
    It was a great chapter, and it seems Snape is getting quite attached to the child without even knowing it.

    I LOVED the name for puppy Harry, Felan. At first I was like, please don't call him Wolfy or Fluffy or any fy-fy thing...that's so overused and I don't see Snape walking around calling "Wolfy?!", so Felan is just perfect. It does tells Harry he is small in every way, telling he IS a child weather he is 5 or 15, but it also sounds strong. I just like the name! ^_^
    I think you are doing a great job between teen Harry and little Harry. I mean, durring the talk it was kind of his 15 year old self...though i do think a 15 year old would flush crimson admiting he was spanked for something, or unable to say the word...but i also loved how he seemed to suddenly become 5 with his little tantrum and all. Is he really affraid of the dark?
    I'm really enjoying this story and i can't wait to see what Felan will do to Mrs. Norris, that aweful cat!
    Also, will Harry be able to write the lines and the essay? I mean, his mind is the same, but his body is that of a five year old along with his skills, he might have trouble wiht the pen-feather thingy. Small children usually get frustrated when unable to do something, ending in tears or a major tantrum...(hint, hint!)
    I do hope we get to see more of little Harry as well as Felan. And Snape is being such a great father already! I can't wait for the adoption and how will Harry take it! Oh, also, what will Minerva will be teaching him???

    well, i better let you go and keep writing. Please update soon! I LOVE this story, the idea is quite unique and i love how this is going. Will be waiting!!
    From Me to You!
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: Marylou (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, it becomes better and better. I like the way you keep Snape in charakter, there are so many stories were Snape is badly OOC so nice and soft!!LOL Good work, thank you (and sorry for my bad english!)
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 6:02 am
Reviewer: maha q8 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this story is gonig to my fav i hope u update soon i love little harry i don't like him much as a wolf but as a small boy he is so cute
    will snape take harry shopping ?? will harry like snape or see him as a father ?? wonder what will happen
    thanks for all your work
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 5:32 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see that the two of them are working their way through to a truce. One of their own making and not forged by Albus or any other outside force.
Title: Problems in Class 17 Jan 2009 5:11 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Considering how strange things must be for him at 5 instead of 15 and how different his second five-year old living situation is from his first, I think he should be emotional.
Title: The Discussion 17 Jan 2009 4:27 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good job, keep up the great work.
Title: A Proposition & A Rescue 17 Jan 2009 3:48 am
Reviewer: maha q8 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh wow this story is getting better and better i was hoping that harry would trun to a 5 or 6 years old but then he was a wolf and it make me very sad i thout snape would take him as awolf but i was very very happy when u made him in to 5 years old i'm so glad i like stories where harry is a baby and snape have to take care of him

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