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Reviews For Like My Father
-P.G.
-P.G.
It was a great chapter, and it seems Snape is getting quite attached to the child without even knowing it. I LOVED the name for puppy Harry, Felan. At first I was like, please don't call him Wolfy or Fluffy or any fy-fy thing...that's so overused and I don't see Snape walking around calling "Wolfy?!", so Felan is just perfect. It does tells Harry he is small in every way, telling he IS a child weather he is 5 or 15, but it also sounds strong. I just like the name! ^_^ I think you are doing a great job between teen Harry and little Harry. I mean, durring the talk it was kind of his 15 year old self...though i do think a 15 year old would flush crimson admiting he was spanked for something, or unable to say the word...but i also loved how he seemed to suddenly become 5 with his little tantrum and all. Is he really affraid of the dark? I'm really enjoying this story and i can't wait to see what Felan will do to Mrs. Norris, that aweful cat! Also, will Harry be able to write the lines and the essay? I mean, his mind is the same, but his body is that of a five year old along with his skills, he might have trouble wiht the pen-feather thingy. Small children usually get frustrated when unable to do something, ending in tears or a major tantrum...(hint, hint!) I do hope we get to see more of little Harry as well as Felan. And Snape is being such a great father already! I can't wait for the adoption and how will Harry take it! Oh, also, what will Minerva will be teaching him??? well, i better let you go and keep writing. Please update soon! I LOVE this story, the idea is quite unique and i love how this is going. Will be waiting!! From Me to You!
will snape take harry shopping ?? will harry like snape or see him as a father ?? wonder what will happen thanks for all your work
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